Scarlet Kaiser

I have to say Geo, well done. You not just adding several creatures in my opinion but rather you are adding an ecosystem into the setting of LOTC. I tend be a biological enthusiast and thus I always enjoy reading lore about flora and fauna. I would hope to see this lore accepted soon. Now for some criticisms. The Tykkan, from what I have read and judging from the picture, should probably be changed to a type of crocodile as crocodiles tend to be found in tropical areas while alligators favor more temperate areas(hence why American Alligators dominate the Southern United States, instead of American Crocodiles which find the area too "cold"). You could also change it to a large species of cayman as well (cayman's are basically tropical alligators though there are some noticeable differences between alligators and caymans). Regardless, this is only a suggestion. From what I read about the Gy'Waka, the original lore stated that they where the only predator on the island (and because of this fact why Gy'Waka are so arrogant.). However, the lore you propose will add several predators native to the island as well as well as a venomous snake. This conflicts a bit with original lore so you may have to change so that Gy'Waka arrogance stemming from how it being the top predator on the island perhaps. Another criticism is that I find type of python or viper may have been a better suited for the Negai than a cobra on the island but if you wish to use a cobra then there is no real harm in going with a cobra. This is a fantasy server after all :P Also... King Cobras (largest cobra in real life) grow up to be 12 feet in length, your Negai grows to be 10 feet feet and there for is not larger than cobras in real-life. You could say it is the heaviest cobra (assuming its build is somewhat similar to a constrictor), or you can adjust the size. Or just drop the title of it being the largest cobra. Aside from those criticisms, I thoroughly enjoyed reading and reviewing your lore and wish you best of luck in getting this implemented as bring a living environment can bring quite a bit of potential RP and making the Kha's home island feel more "alive" so to speak.

This is a most excellent guide to RPing with weapons in LOTC. I will look forward to reading the additional articles. Also, for the crossbow section, perhaps you should consult with Temp on their proper use. I recall that he made a guide dedicated to Roleplaying with the crossbow. It is my only suggestion as of now. Best of luck ^_^

(( There used to be the Nywari Gypsies back in Asulon. Not sure of their status as of now however. ))