[Accepted] [Pending] Ryandoesyt1's Whitelist Application Application

[Adelemphii 1766]

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: RyanDoesYT1

How old are you?: I am currently 12.

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): I am aware that the server is PG-13

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): Yes I havehttps://www.lordofth...y-application/ 

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes I have read and agreed to the rules.

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: The rule i agree with the most is Multi-boxing - Using two of your own accounts to RP with yourself or having having two of your own characters interact with each other in any way.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): None of the rules confuse me, all of the rules make sense.

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? I found out about lord of the craft from youtube videos.

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: Roleplaying is acting out a character with a lot of personality.

What is metagaming?: Metagaming is when you use info that your character doesn't have

What is powergaming?: Powergaming is making your character like a god where they won't die or make mistakes.

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

Character’s name: Adresin Tunnelsmasher

Character’s gender: Male

Character’s race: Dwarf

Character’s age:77

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): My parents were killed at a young age by Dared Starbreaker when they got in the way of him making the UnderKingdom. I was then captured by the orcs then with wit and skill I was able to sneak passed the dumb ass orcs and run away then later I met my long lost brother at the capital. We always hated the wraiths at a personal level because they killed our family they didn't kill our parents but they killed other dwarves and we say that all dwarves are our family. We seek to one day get revenge on the orcs and win the war.

         Me and my brother where then on our way to the Scarlet Lotus when we heard some twigs crack and my brother and I where ambushed by orcs. Then we where held up at their camp we had to fight against 6 orcs and I almost died. Then my brother put me on his shoulder and carried me to the elves to help get me healed. After that I swore on my life that I would kill the person who almost killed me. Then after that day there was a battle against the dwarves and the orcs my brother and I killed a total of 26 orcs together. Then one day in the mines the lights cut out and millions of spiders came running out and after that day I hated the dark.

Ambitions: To get revenge and avenge our parents and family.

Strengths/Talents: My character's strength is he is really strong. My character have no talents.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: My character's weaknesses are he cannot swim, he is afraid of the dark.

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight):  My character has brown hair height is 4'11 weight 150 pounds.

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):

[_Stigwig 1510]

Congratulations on being accepted, please wait patiently for a GM to implement you so you may begin playing, it shouldn't take too long! If you need any help either send me a forum PM or message me in-game at stigwig.

 

I've placed your application on pending due to the fact that there are a number of flaws within your application, areas that you need to fix in order to be able to play on the server:

 

- Your biography is incredibly clichéd, orcs killing a character's parents is a backstory often used and you should edit this to a reason that is less generic and something to add more depth to your character.

 

- A dwarf being afraid of the dark is incredibly unusual, but a very good idea! Could you please incorporate into your backstory why Adresin is afraid of the dark?

 

- Your biography has server lore, but not quite enough. I need you to add a few more pieces, examples being cities, people or events.

 

You have 24 hours to make the changes I listed - please send me a forum PM if you need any help fixing them and/or when you've fixed them and need me to review the application again.

[_Stigwig 1510]

Moved to Accepted Applications Forum.

Your application will be Implemented by a GM shortly.

[Lark 2227]

Whitelisted. Moved to Implemented.