Markus Henvik Goldfield-Aveere

[Galendar 631]

Character Name
Markus Henvik Goldfield-Aveere

Basic Information
 

Nicknames:
The Knight of Brolimund
Age:
20
Gender:
Male
Race:
Human, Northerner
Status:
Content, preparing for war


Description

Height:
6'5''
Weight:
200
Body Type:
Muscular, toned
Eyes:
A Dark Blue
Hair:
Dark Brown
Skin:
Caucasian
Markings/Tattoos:
Several scars on his lower neck and around his upper torso.
Health:
Healthy
Personality:
Strong willed, diligent, friendly, respectful, honorable
Inventory:
Armor, longbow, longsword, arming sword, iron banded shield
Further Details:
From a distant land known to him as Brolimund. He recognizes this as being a continent, though rather it is a small island.


Life Style

Alignment:
Neutral Good
Deity:
The Creator/The High Pontiff
Religion:
The One True Faith
Alliance/Nation/Home
The Holy Orenian Empire
Job/Class:
Branch Manager of the North Orenian Trade Company

Hedge Knight
Title(s):
Branch Manager, Knight of Brolimund
Profession(s):
Smith, Merchant
Special Skill(s):
Leadership/Management, ability to command in battle.
Flaw(s):
Confident, certain, ambitious


 

 

Weaponry

Fighting Style:
Aggressive
Trained Weapon:
Axe, Longsword, Arming Sword, Shield

Archery:

Longbow with bodkin arrows



Biography

Parents:
Ceto Aveere and Averander Aveere
Siblings:
Galendar Aveere, Lee Aveere, Elisa Aveere
Children:
N/a
Extended Family
The Aveere Family




History
The early life of this bear of a man was shared without parents or siblings. It was not long after he was born that both his father, Averander, and mother, Ceto, departed for the realm known as Asulon with his siblings. In their leave, he was left to a family friend by his father whose name was simply 'Heinrik'. This man was a chieftain of one of the northern clans which the Aveere family originated, leaving young Markus in good hands. Heinrik raised the young Markus to become a soldier and leader on the battlefield, teaching him how the clan politics worked and how to assert his place as the leader once he had passed on.

It would not be but fifteen years before Heinrik passed, leaving the men within the massive clan to enter the sparring arena to fight to the death for control of the clan. Markus, only sixteen, went on to defeat men twice his age and strength through the talents taught to him by his adopted father, leading him to retain control of the clan and lead, should he choose. In this case, though, he did not. His interest in his family lead him to depart the clan, leaving the title of Chieftain behind for others to squabble over. This would lead him to wandering until the age of twenty where he would arrive on the continent of Vailor.

Markus was unsure of what to think, upon his arrival only seeing death and destruction. Humans were fighting Humans while the other races squabbled over what little it is they could control, being meaningless to the expansive Orenian Empire. The self entitled 'Knight of Brolimund' would become a title he had used to introduce himself to many upon his arrival to Felsen, though it seemed it would matter little in this big world of politics. Shortly following, Markus met a man by the name of Gloop who he ended up employing under as a Branch Manager, smith, contractor, and mercenary leader of a sect of the Northern Orenian Company.


Artwork

[HereticTakao 16]

I honestly feel like there can be more work put into this.

The description  needs more detail to it, something that will give me a mental image of this character. Also describe is combat styles, how he does them. I suggest toning down the amount of weapons he is trained in. He is what, twenty? Expand on his familial relationships as well! What's his opinion on his parents/siblings? Those are a few things I like to point on in the character profile. If you like to see more hit me up in a DM! =^w^=

Edited October 17, 2015 by Warrior_Takao