The Poems of An Impure

[Lawrna 440]

These are the poems of a High Elven woman who was banished from her city, Haelun'or.

These are the poems she wrote about her husband, Ereinion.

These are the poems of her life.

Feedback would be nice.

One

What seemed magnificent,

pure and vigilant.

Was all rotten

and near forgotten.

Without a second thought

I left to go tie my love knot.

Two

My love was a disgrace

He was the wrong race.

So I spat on their ground

And turned around

Leaving them behind their silver walls

And lonely halls.

Three

They told me it was wrong

But the urge was too strong

His handsome smile

It all started on the green isle

A glance, a grin

Black and white skin

Four

Burning to the touch

I will never have enough

His skin against mine

His fingers tracing my spine.

Never do I want this to end

Forever condemned

To his red eyes

Eternally his prize

Five

Dark as the night

People full of fright

He is evil

At the end of the day

He’ll come back my way.

With a smile on his face

And a loving embrace.

Six

His lava eyes watching my every move,

his black hair is between my fingers.

His radiating heat and his heartbeat,

his sweet scent lingers.

Everything is perfect,

just me and him.

Way up high in the keep,

we just grin.

Thank you for reading!

I might write more, depending on what happens in Arya Orchid's life.

[Samler 1566]

One cute (impure) poem, I really do like it. +1 from me! :3

[Mithradites 1168]

Absolutely lovely, you repulsive, impure vermin!

I hope for more disgusting poetry from you in the future!

xD

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

wonderful! way to go for doing stuff that most haelun'or disapproves! and making it sound very beautiful!

seriously, very nice poetry.

[EboBren' 87]

These are great! I really liked the syllable amounts in Poem 6. Perhaps in the future you can make longer ones with different rhyming patters.

[Knox213 10]

Moved to the Archive. It shall be sorted into the appropriate category shortly.