Alana (Previously Latsi)

hey was just wondering if you could look at my application and let me know if i need to change anything because i have a feeling something's wrong with it because it has about 20 views and no responses so could you let me know what;s wrong with it if anything? here's the link http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/19881-gwarriors-application-revised/