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Tianrui Rei looks through the information, and then promptly looks at her own garbs. After glancing back and forth between her own clothes versus the well written document, she sighs a bit in embarrassment. "This is such an informative document, I'm thankful for the author. I should really get a wardrobe update..." She nods, writing down a couple of notes quoting the material. "Time to challenge the fashion limits of the Shuhe!" She chuckles, sauntering off.

Meditative Lesson on Huajiao [OOC: Monday 6/28/2021 @ 5:00 PM EST] [!] A scroll made of bamboo is left in front of every residence in Yong Ping, and other scrolls are posted on notice boards of neighboring allies of the Jade State to garner more interest. “To those seeking guidance and meditation, This continent is riddled with strife, for some it leads to glory and for others an untimely end. Unfortunately, some have forgotten a path of kindness for our fellow beings, a consequence of negative desire. For many lunar cycles, a monk's time was spent hardening the spirit and perfecting untethering of desire bound to the land. However what makes a monk truly devot, is to practice selflessness and kindness. Detaching themselves from negativity and instead offering positivity to others. To show altruism where there is none. Now more than ever, it brings great importance to teach others the same. In order to help spread our philosophy of selflessness and detachment of negative energy, the Yujin Monastery will be hosting a public meditation and seminar on Huajiao in the main temple of Yong Ping. Huajiao is the path to enlightenment and betterment of oneself, and it's encouraged for anyone interested to come. Regardless of background or age, we welcome allies of the Jade State of Yong Ping and others who roam the continent to this lesson. We will teach the basics of Huajiao and conduct meditation led by the Elders of Yujin. The meditative lesson will end with handing out bamboo sticky rice, assorted fruits, and tea. That time will be used for anyone interested in joining the Yujin Monastery, or to ask any more questions. We encourage those who are lost, or seeking guidance, to join us in this meditative lesson. The Yujin Monastery looks forward to greeting new faces and new monks in our fold. 真诚地, 风桂花【Fēng Guìhuā】 青龍【 Qīnglóng】 ~* OOC *~ Huajiao lesson, meditation, and food! Interested in learning about Huajiao, becoming a monk of Yujin Monastery, or just want to hang out for the food? Make sure to come over and say hi!

I understand your ambitions and ideas, Chi as an expanded concept on a cosmic scale is really interesting in regards to asserting an important role in Magical World Lore. I look forward to your lore in the near future, at a glance it sounds like its going to be a big interesting project. I wish you luck on your idea and writing! :D

I'm talking more of the niche of Chi Manipulation fills, this iteration of the rewrite pays homage to the history and cultural origins, but is definitely not enforced in the rewrite. The idea of Chi itself is exotic compared to other magics on the server, which gives it appeal to anyone glancing at it, but conversely it's definitely not a necessary ability to enjoy the culture. Now with this writing, people have a choice to stick with culture or go rogue with their own ideas, which this writing asserts by not enforcing tenets or culture. It opens new ways for monks to explore 'life energy' on a grander scale unhindered by cultural restrictions, which is something I advocate for. When I meant that an expansion isn't necessary right now, is a personal opinion since I'd be more focus on rebuilding our community. In fact, it's more interesting for a stronger version of Chi to be derived and created from RP from extensive study of 'life energy'. In regards to the other magics, it's easy for Chi to disappear and monks go to learn Water/Fire evocation or something similar. You could say the same about most magics and CA's. If others such as yourself want the idea of 'life energy' to evolve in a different way aside from Chi, by no means am I saying that you shouldn't, I think it'd be an interesting road to take especially if Chi fails. Magic at the end of the day is an aesthetic that improves upon pre-existing culture, roles, and RP, which this rewrite fulfills regardless of how potent the abilities are. In my opinion, what gives magic an appeal is when there is a niche type connected to it. Regardless if you respond, it's fine to disagree, and a discussion helps open up new ideas/thoughts. I enjoyed your criticisms and work in the previous iterations of Chi, so I look forward to seeing your written ideals of these concepts in the future!

I don't agree with letting Chi die off, it definitely needed improving but the cultural aspects is what makes Chi an interesting niche and magic to learn. Sun/Moon Chi was initially made as a bonus to the cultural aspect of Huajiao and successor to old Chi, the focus was for Chi to be an existing tangible energy to support its cultural concept from Hou-Zi Huajiao. If we're going all the way back to the first few iterations of Chi, it didn't change that it was for an Eastern Asian monk RP niche and it still retains that even now. As an old Hou-Zi player I don't see how this rewrite hinders the magical concept or even the RP concept, sure Chi could be greater but there isn't any reason or necessity for it right now, other magics could easily fill in the gaps that Chi briefly touches on. It fulfills its original purpose and exists for the RP niche it covers. In its current state as a single slot, this rewrite works fine since the niche it revolves around is a relatively small population.

Glad theres a new rewrite out, the formatting is really nice at a glance. I'll only comment on what I didn't work on; I really like the way the monk abilities pan out in difficulty and intensity, it makes a lot more sense than the original Sun + Moon Chi Manipulation system. Tier progression feels natural and earned, which is nice to see with this rewrite. Smaller criticisms I'll just DM, but overall its an improvement based on the previous rewrites I've seen and I'm lovin' it. +1

Tianrui Rei marveled at the well written advertisement for the YPA, hoping to see some new faces in the army soon.

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Steaming hot, right off the creative press... Very nice, it was fun watching the drafts and helping out wherever! +1

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Quinn O’Rourke blinks at the newspaper, eating some bisquits as she read over the contents. She then points at the section about her tavern, looking to her cousins. “Oh! T’ats me! Oi like t’e formattin’ of t’is newspaper.” She exclaimed with a smile.

~* Summons to the Way of Sun Final Trial *~ [OOC: Saturday 6/27/2020 @ 3:00 PM EST] 4th of Sun’s Smile, 1773 [!] A scroll is posted up as a summons for two individuals, and the Hou-Zi of Arcas. “Nǐ Hǎo Xiōngdì hé Xuéshēng For dozens of lunar cycles, Feng Guihua’s students have been vividly engaged in self-study, traveling all across Arcas in order to experience the life of all creatures. Now, Guihua calls for the attendance of Fènghuáng and Qīng lóng to their final trials to determine their mastery. Along with this, Guihua calls for the entirety of the Hou-Zi and Huajiao monks to come to watch their progress. There will be a buffet prepared, as the duo will be tasked with one last trial of the Way of Sun. They both will prepare the final dance of the Way of Sun together, performing their ultimate stability and balance of their will. This ritual is merely performative to the rest of the group attending, and the success of their dance will ultimately decide if they are ready to be deemed as masters of Way of Sun. This is a celebratory gathering for this trial, and Guihua implores all Hou-Zi & Friends to come to attend. 真诚地, 风桂花【Fēng Guìhuā】 Way of Sun Monk & Councillor of Dengyu Monastery ~* OOC *~ A bit of a small event centered around the Hou-Zi and my two students! Making this a public display, feel free to swing by and watch.

Ra’Ruchee’Kul stares at the trial announcement, reading over the long list of names and the writings of the High Aelkos. “Hm, with change comes undoing the problems of a long troubled past.” The Kha’Pantera exhaled, going to rest in her abode underneath a large tree. A lone elfess sneezes in the afterlife, noticing an old friend remembered her as she watched the events of the Silver State in her ethereal form.

The Verdant Scéal Tavern Grand Opening 15th of the First Seed 1771 [OOC: This Sunday, June 7th, 2020 @ 4:00 PM EST] [!] A rather small, yet incredibly formal missive was posted in front of the building in question. Left at the bottom of the printed parchment paper was the O’Rourke Family seal. The public letter would read as follows: “Greetings citizens of the Kaedreni Realm, The once empty tavern of the city of Kaedrin has now been filled with a change of ownership, under Quinn O’Rourke. Although work has already been done, the official opening was necessary for the building itself. With the change in decoratives and menu shifts, there also comes the grand opening of the establishment. This grand opening will consist of tasting the fine liquor brewed in the region, and the usual merry celebration with a toast done by the Tavern Owner. Anyone all over the Orenian lands may come to indulge in the feasting and drinking, as for the opening of the tavern all drink and food will be available. The featured drink for the opening, however, will be freely handed out as a gift for coming to the Verdant Scéal Tavern. During the festivities, the card games will begin. Éireann Blind Man's Bluff - A style of poker where each person is given two cards face down. The dealer will give out shots of whiskey for each person. Each player needs to bet at least one chip to continue playing. A pair of cards that are not matching in suit or symbol is called an Rí, a two-card pair matching suit is called a Banríon, and a two-card perfect pair is called a Foirfe. The highest cards win, which will be explained thoroughly during the game. The loser drinks and there is no set amount of players as multiple decks will be used. The last guest standing will get a neat trophy at the end to boast about. At this time, Quinn O’Rourke is also looking for individuals to come work at the tavern. You must have experience at another establishment to start work immediately, lest you will undergo waiting and hosting training first and foremost. Barkeeps earn 100m per week flat, and any minae they earn during the shift in a similar manner. Before a trainee becomes a Barkeep, they must learn the entire menu and how to make each one. Quinn is looking for a total of 2-3 trainees to have. This Grand Opening is in hopes of gathering new prospects for Kaedrin, and to essentially drink merrily. The Verdant Scéal Tavern looks forward to your attendance on this festive evening. Sincerely, Quinn O’Rourke Tavern Keeper of The Verdant Scéal Tavern