A New Adventurer Has Spawned!

[Acerius 6]

It's me. Hey,

 

I'm Acerius but you can address me by Acer/Ace; if you are so inclined, you may even address me by my real name, Joseph (not Joe). I'm thirteen years old and have been in the roleplaying scene for a few years now and I'd like to consider myself average or slightly above that for a serious roleplayer. I come from England, which is where all the cool people live. I don't have a lot to say in this application apart from that, though you may notice that my English is absolutely amazing.

 

Feel free to drop your jaw and stare wide-eyed at my massive application which is very sexy indeed. Feel free to read through it and hit me up some suggestions, as I'm pretty open to taking those. Before you ask, it took me two-three hours to write that all up, My fingers and wrists hurt from smacking my keyboard, I'm tired, it's coming up to 1AM. Apart from all of that, I think it turned out pretty good. http://www.lordofthecraft.net/topic/113958-acerius-lord-of-the-craft-application/

 

Just noticed my application got accepted in three minutes of it being posted. That means it took the moderator three minutes to read it and write the reply. Holy crap, I think I may of just set a record? I'm too amazing, right? Haha, anyway... hit me up on Steam any time you like or in Minecraft and whatever. I enjoy shouting at people a lot in games and so forth so you may find that funny.

 

- Acerius

[Malaise 1570]

I must admit, your application was very impressive. I almost doubt the fact that you're a new player, rather than an alternate account belonging to a player previously accepted to the server. Welcome to LoTC, and I look forward to seeing you in game when the server is put back online.

[bickando 3967]

 I don't have a lot to say in this application apart from that, however, you may notice that my English is absolutely amazing.

 

The correct phrasing of this sentence would be:

"I don't have a lot to say in this application apart from that, though you may notice that my English is absolutely amazing."

You left a floating comma after however, and the word "however" itself implies an opposite, but in this case the second clause wasn't an opposite of the first.

 

Also, welcome to LOTC.

[Samoblivion 532]

Welcome aboard, I hope you enjoy it here :)

[Wolf Druid Ouity 1461]

Welcome, friend! Hope you enjoy your stay.

[comanderbly^ 499]

Welcome to the Lord of The Craft! I hope you enjoy a good roleplaying experience.

[Crayfishchris 751]

I claim this new player as my own.

[Fid 566]

Humility is a virtue.

[Pandasan 74]

Not a chance, Cray-cray. I bought him first before you even looked at him.
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On another case, Welcome to LoTC.
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P.S.
I'm better than that slaver, Crayfishchris
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Enjoy your stay.
 

[Jibuis Winterborn (Vinnie) 72]

Welcome, enjoy the views and stay, this is a 4 star hotel you know!

[monkeypoacher 8055]

Welcome, Acerius. If you keep this attitude up, I'm going to break your kneecaps.

[Original 54]

Wait where is the swimming pool?

[Acerius 6]

Welcome, Acerius. If you keep this attitude up, I'm going to break your kneecaps.

 

How rude.

[Overland 349]

Welcome to the server!

[Priceflash 832]

How rude.

This isn't full house ;=;

 

 

whoops this is from like 4 days ago