Aehkaj 516 Share Posted January 10, 2023 This lore amendment seeks to tweak the recipe and redlines of [✓] Alchemy - Aesthetic Pack 1: Fume of Songs. Spoiler Original Lore: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/188322-✓-alchemy-aesthetic-pack-1/ The Current Rendition Recipe: Base: Distilled Water Sound x4 Balance x1 Grace x1 Procedure: 1. Completely dry and grind up the reagents of sound, balance, and grace, and place them in a vessel filled with the distilled water. 2. While the vessel is left open, the mixture is to be brought to a boil. As soon as such happens, the entire mixture must be bottled. 3. Add the dried and ground up reagent of travel, and seal the bottle with a cork or other secure method. Slowly heat the bottle, and the entire mixture will become a thick vapor. Effect: When the sealed bottle is opened, the vapor would quickly escape and spread throughout the area. The vapor would carry with it melodious voices and enchanting music, flowing through ears of Descendants with grace. The voices would sound like they came from the mouths of Descendants, and even though it sounded like singing, no words could be understood. Indistinguishable, foreign “instruments” could be heard pleasantly complimenting the voices. The chance of the music being horrendous or chaotic was none, and it would always cause a pleasing encounter. A small vial could be used in a small bedroom to lull an infant to sleep, or giant batches in large vessels could be made to offer entertaining music for a large ballroom party. Current Redlines: Redlines: - Speech is prohibited throughout the duration of the making of this potion. - The music is not loud enough to distract anyone. - The music effect is purely ambient and aesthetic, and cannot be used for anything else. - May not be used in combat whatsoever. Proposed Changes Recipe: Base: Distilled Water Mundane | Sound x4 Mundane | Balance x1 Mundane | Grace x1 (Optional) Mundane | Any The addition of extra optional symbols is so that the alchemist has the option to tweak the specific song the potion will make. It’s up to the alchemist as to what symbols they add and what the effect produces. This just adds to it being an aesthetic choice, with the pre-defined description still retaining any voices or instruments to be of a foreign tongue/instrument. Procedure: The alchemist should not speak while completing the process. The alchemist will prepare a vessel of distilled water, adding in the counts of Sound, Balance, and Grace. The mixture should be brought to a boil. Add in any optional Symbols to customize then seal the container Swirl the water and symbols, allowing them to mix then set aside to cool. While it cools it will slowly turn into a light vapor-like substance. The procedure on the original rendition seems outdated with the current rendition and at least to me seemed somewhat confusing. This change is simply to simplify and modernize its creation. Effect: The effect should remain the same from the original post; however, if the alchemist chooses to specify the sound the concoction produces the description should be modified detailing it’s sound followed by the fact that any singing/instruments will sound similar however like nothing you’d normally see played. New Redlines - Speech is prohibited throughout the duration of the making of this potion. - The music is not loud enough to distract anyone. - The music effect is purely ambient and aesthetic, and cannot be used for anything else. I elected to remove the redline stating that the potion can not be used in a combat scenario, as there’s no reason for the redline. The potion is purely ambient, but players should still be allowed to use one in any situation if they must, such as adding musical flavor to a bar fight or something. Overall: The idea behind the Amendment is geared to add aesthetic flavor to RP situations, I just think the potion deserved some tweaks to fit modern alchemy and reagents while also giving the players more freedom when creating and using this potion. 7 Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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