Order Of The Clerics (Recruiting)

[Thrym 188]

1)MC Name & RP Name:

Fengric ((BoxOfDOG))

2)Chosen Patron:

Gazardiael: The Aengul of New Beginnings

3)Reason For Joining (do not have the reason be to become Ascended):

Fengric was raised knowing that his father was a war cleric, and he fought in a war. He listened to the valor and righteousness his father showed and demonstrated, and Fengric wished to follow in his footsteps. After he had grown, he realized that he not only wanted to join because of his father, but to serve his patron and live a holy life as a cleric, to one day become the Prophet, the highest in the whole Order of the Clerics.

4)Race:

Human

5)Flaws in Your Character:

Though Fengric is holy in spirit, he is fast to anger, but is not one to hold a grudge. He believes that no one is perfect, of course, but he still strives to please the gods and ascend.

6) How long have you been on the server:

Since Tuesday April 17th 2012

Scenario Questions-Answer how you would react to each situation.

7) You notice an Apprentice Shade harassing a lowly citizen. [shades Are Evil Mages]

Fengric walks over to the Shade and asks "What quarrel do you have with this man, Shade?"

The shade makes a snide remark that Fengric could not make out. Fengric puts his hand on the shades shoulder as he turned his back to Fengric, he suddenly felt a sharp pain in his hand, as though someone had sliced it open. Fengric was enraged, calmed himself. He took his other hand over his hurt one, a light shined and his palm felt content again. Fengric pushed the shade aside, and told the man to run, and the peasant did so at once. The shade looked angry and he barked at him "You just sent my money on its way!" Fengric looked at the shade, and asked "How much did this man ask for? It seems to me that he hadn't had any money left?" the shade cursed under his breath, and Fengric said angrily "Here, take this and be on your way! Greedy filth." He left a sum of money with the shade, and went on his way.

8) You see a small child shivering in the snow.

Fengric sees the small child, he walks over and kindly tells him to get on his feet. The freezing and scared child got up, and Fengric took out a large coat from his bag that he brought for his journey and wrapped it around the child. The little boy seemed to have been too cold to talk, but Fengric all the more reason to get him to an inn as soon as possible. He picked up the child and ran to the nearest town, and brought him into the local inn. He then payed for the child's room and drink, and asked the barkeep to look after him for awhile. Fengric left the coat with the child, and continued his quest.

9) You are walking down the road when a bandit stops you and threatens to kill you if you don't give him all your money and valuables.

Fengric looks up and down at him, noticing many flaws in the way he threatens him. He broke his stance in a matter of seconds, and took all the weapons from the man, and gave it to the nearest guard. Then hinting them of the thief.

10) As you walk through the local market place a person begins to yell that Aeriel and the other patrons are weak and cruel and claims that joining Iblees is the only way to survive.

Fengric went away from the small stall he was buying from, and walks to the man. He stands in front of the fool and says to the crowd "Do not believe this fool. He has been cursed and blinded from the truth, he hasn't heard the stories of Iblees! Iblees was treacherous, and evil, the only thing he will bring you is sadness and remorse, and nothing more. For all the races forefathers fought against him, and prevailed! You may survive if you join Iblees, but you will lose your life and soul doing so. The deities are strong, and give all the good in the world. Do not deny this obvious truth." Fengric stopped there, and said nothing more. And walked off hearing the uproar against the man speaking his rubbish.

11) A person walks up and asks you, "Why does God allow suffering to continue?"

Fengric looked at the man and said "God continues to test our belief in him, this is why he does so. You may believe that this sadness will continue forever, but believe in God, and in this life, or the afterlife he will bring you wisdom and joy in amounts no one can fathom. God wants us to forgive him for what little he has done, as he has forgiven us for all the sadness our world has caused." Fengric was happy with his answer, and said nothing more until the citizen walked away.

Denied

This is the MAIN thing I noticed, it is not the only thing you should fix:

You don't have any powers yet so shouldn't be able to heal yourself or use powers at all

[Thrym 188]

1)MC Name & RP Name: Silentstealth,Jax

2)Chosen Patron:Gazardiael

3)Reason For Joining (do not have the reason be to become Ascended):

I want to protect all people in Asulon and hone my skills. I also would like to find my trueself and release my inner-power. I feel that this guild can help accomplish tons of things and become the best citizen I can be.

4)Race: Human

5)Flaws in Your Character: He loves females and is easily distracted by them along with ale. He is a bit too confident and often underestimates his opponents.

6) How long have you been on the server:

About one week.

Scenario Questions-Answer how you would react to each situation.

7) You notice an Apprentice Shade harassing a lowly citizen. [shades Are Evil Mages]

Apprentice Shade: Give me all of what you have.

Citizen: Please, leave me alone I don't have much.

Apprentice shade pushes down the citizen.

Jax approaches the shade slowly.

Jax: Please back away from that citizen.

Apprentice Shade: why should I?

Jax: It would be the right thing to do.

Apprentice Shade Laughs.

Apprentice Shade: Like I care what's right.

Jax: I will give you some food if you leave this citizen alone.

Apprentice Shade: I don't want any of your food I want minas.

Jax: Well then go find work and make some minas.

Apprentice Shade: Ha Ha Ha, This is my work.

Jax unsheathes his blade.

Apprentice Shade swiftly scurries away.

Jax: Are you okay now citizen?

Citizen: Yes, Thank you for the help.

Jax walks away slowly.

8) You see a small child shivering in the snow.

Jax hurries over to the child.

Jax: Are you okay child?

Child: I am cold, wet, and I've lost my parents.

Jax uses the materials in his bag along with materials in the area to make the child some suitable clothing.

Child: Much better, but I am still lost.

Jax: Come with me child I will take you to the nearest inn until we find your parents.

Jax escorts the child to an inn,pays for some food ,water, and a room for the child.

Jax: Stay here until I find your parents.

Child: Okay.

9) You are walking down the road when a bandit stops you and threatens to kill you if you don't give him all your money and valuables.

Jax looks the bandit in the face.

Jax: Please back away and I will try to help you.

Jax hands the bandit some food and a couple of minas.

Bandit: Th- Thank you kind sir.

Jax: It was no problem when you need anything you can come to me instead of trying to rob people.

10) As you walk through the local market place a person begins to yell that Aeriel and the other patrons are weak and cruel and claims that joining Iblees is the only way to survive.

Jax approaches the person and ask him to stop yelling out such remarks.

Jax: I refuse to join the Iblees and yet I will still survive, You will be fine if you don't join the Iblees just remember to look towards the light.

11) A person walks up and asks you, "Why does God allow suffering to continue?"

Jax: God allows suffering so you will not forsake him, He also wants to show you that through his might you can overcome any obstacle in your path.

The Person: Thank you, I understand now.

Jax: Whenever you feel down feel free to talk to me.

Denied

Main Reason, there are a few minor ones:

Shades aren't petty robbers. They are Evil Mages. Read in previous Cleric Threads to see how Salamandra described them

[Fengric 68]

Denied

This is the MAIN thing I noticed, it is not the only thing you should fix:

You don't have any powers yet so shouldn't be able to heal yourself or use powers at all

Is it alright to re-submit the same application but make those fixes, and add some other crucial things as well?

[Thrym 188]

Is it alright to re-submit the same application but make those fixes, and add some other crucial things as well?

Yes, just re-post the app (or edit it and post that you've edited it)

[Fengric 68]

1)MC Name & RP Name:

Fengric ((BoxOfDOG))

2)Chosen Patron:

Gazardiael: The Aengul of New Beginnings

3)Reason For Joining (do not have the reason be to become Ascended):

Fengric was raised knowing that his father was a war cleric, and he fought in a war. He listened to the valor and righteousness his father showed and demonstrated, and Fengric wished to follow in his footsteps. After he had grown, he realized that he not only wanted to join because of his father, but to serve his patron and live a holy life as a cleric, to one day become the Prophet, the highest in the whole Order of the Clerics.

4)Race:

Human

5)Flaws in Your Character:

Though Fengric is holy in spirit, he is fast to anger, but is not one to hold a grudge. He believes that no one is perfect, of course, but he still strives to please the gods and ascend.

6) How long have you been on the server:

Since Tuesday April 17th 2012

Scenario Questions-Answer how you would react to each situation.

7) You notice an Apprentice Shade harassing a lowly citizen. [shades Are Evil Mages]

Fengric walks over to the Shade and asks "What quarrel do you have with this man, Shade?"

The shade makes a snide remark that Fengric could not make out. Fengric puts his hand on the shades shoulder as he turned his back to Fengric, he suddenly felt a sharp pain in his hand, as though someone had sliced it open. Fengric was enraged, but he calmed himself. He didn't have anything to wrap his hand in, he was reduced now to using his left hand until someone could mend it. Fengric pushed the shade aside, and told the man to run, and the peasant did so at once. The shade looked angry and he barked at him "You just set my prey on the loose! He wronged me and he must pay!" in a horrible and rough voice. Fengric looked at the shade, and asked "The man was a citizen, surely you would rather not waste your breath and kill a peasant? Rather than praising Iblees, or doing whatever your filthy kind does!" the shade cursed under his breath, and Fengric said angrily "Be on your way! I forbid you from this land and you shall go! Or by Gazardiael you shall pay the price." The shade stared at him with such malice that his face turned red with rage, Fengric noticed and said "BEGONE!" The shade went on his way, saying horrible things about him he would rather not dwell on.

8) You see a small child shivering in the snow.

Fengric sees the small child, he walks over and kindly tells him to get on his feet. The freezing and scared child got up, and Fengric took out a large coat from his bag that he brought for his journey, and wrapped it around the child. The little boy seemed to have been too cold to talk, but for Fengric it is all the more reason to get him to an inn as soon as possible. He picked up the child and ran to the nearest town, and brought him into the local inn. He then payed for the child's room and drink, and asked the barkeep to look after him for awhile. Fengric left the coat with the child, and continued his quest.

9) You are walking down the road when a bandit stops you and threatens to kill you if you don't give him all your money and valuables.

Fengric looks up and down at him, noticing many flaws in the way he threatens him. He broke his stance in a matter of seconds. He looked at the knocked out man with malice, but he didn't want to sink to his level. He took the dagger off him, and dragged the thief to a guard and explained the situation.

10) As you walk through the local market place a person begins to yell that Aeriel and the other patrons are weak and cruel and claims that joining Iblees is the only way to survive.

Fengric went away from the small stall he was buying from, and walks to the man. He stands in front of the fool and says to the crowd "Do not believe this fool. He has been cursed and blinded from the truth, he hasn't heard the stories of Iblees! Iblees was treacherous, and evil, the only thing he will bring you is sadness and remorse, and nothing more. For all the races forefathers fought against him, and prevailed! You may survive if you join Iblees, but you will lose your life and soul doing so. The deities are strong, and give all the good in the world. Do not deny this obvious truth." Fengric stopped there, and said nothing more. And walked off hearing the uproar against the man speaking his rubbish.

11) A person walks up and asks you, "Why does God allow suffering to continue?"

Fengric looked at the man and said "God continues to test our belief in him, this is why he does so. You may believe that this sadness will continue forever, but believe in God so that in this life, or the afterlife he will bring you wisdom and joy in amounts no one can fathom. God wants us to forgive him for what little he has done, as he has forgiven us for all the sadness and pain our world has caused." Fengric took off his helmet and stared at the man with his vivid blue eyes until the man said "Thank you.. May Aeriel and Gazardiael bless you till your end." Fengric smiled, put his helmet back on, and continued to walk.

[Thrym 188]

1)MC Name & RP Name:

Fengric ((BoxOfDOG))

2)Chosen Patron:

Gazardiael: The Aengul of New Beginnings

3)Reason For Joining (do not have the reason be to become Ascended):

Fengric was raised knowing that his father was a war cleric, and he fought in a war. He listened to the valor and righteousness his father showed and demonstrated, and Fengric wished to follow in his footsteps. After he had grown, he realized that he not only wanted to join because of his father, but to serve his patron and live a holy life as a cleric, to one day become the Prophet, the highest in the whole Order of the Clerics.

4)Race:

Human

5)Flaws in Your Character:

Though Fengric is holy in spirit, he is fast to anger, but is not one to hold a grudge. He believes that no one is perfect, of course, but he still strives to please the gods and ascend.

6) How long have you been on the server:

Since Tuesday April 17th 2012

Scenario Questions-Answer how you would react to each situation.

7) You notice an Apprentice Shade harassing a lowly citizen. [shades Are Evil Mages]

Fengric walks over to the Shade and asks "What quarrel do you have with this man, Shade?"

The shade makes a snide remark that Fengric could not make out. Fengric puts his hand on the shades shoulder as he turned his back to Fengric, he suddenly felt a sharp pain in his hand, as though someone had sliced it open. Fengric was enraged, but he calmed himself. He didn't have anything to wrap his hand in, he was reduced now to using his left hand until someone could mend it. Fengric pushed the shade aside, and told the man to run, and the peasant did so at once. The shade looked angry and he barked at him "You just sent my money on its way!" Fengric looked at the shade, and asked "How much did this man ask for? It seems to me that he hadn't had any money left?" the shade cursed under his breath, and Fengric said angrily "Here, take this and be on your way! Greedy filth." He left a sum of money with the shade, and went on his way.

8) You see a small child shivering in the snow.

Fengric sees the small child, he walks over and kindly tells him to get on his feet. The freezing and scared child got up, and Fengric took out a large coat from his bag that he brought for his journey, and wrapped it around the child. The little boy seemed to have been too cold to talk, but for Fengric it is all the more reason to get him to an inn as soon as possible. He picked up the child and ran to the nearest town, and brought him into the local inn. He then payed for the child's room and drink, and asked the barkeep to look after him for awhile. Fengric left the coat with the child, and continued his quest.

9) You are walking down the road when a bandit stops you and threatens to kill you if you don't give him all your money and valuables.

Fengric looks up and down at him, noticing many flaws in the way he threatens him. He broke his stance in a matter of seconds. He looked at the knocked out man with malice, but he didn't want to sink to his level. He took the dagger off him, and dragged the thief to a guard and explained the situation.

10) As you walk through the local market place a person begins to yell that Aeriel and the other patrons are weak and cruel and claims that joining Iblees is the only way to survive.

Fengric went away from the small stall he was buying from, and walks to the man. He stands in front of the fool and says to the crowd "Do not believe this fool. He has been cursed and blinded from the truth, he hasn't heard the stories of Iblees! Iblees was treacherous, and evil, the only thing he will bring you is sadness and remorse, and nothing more. For all the races forefathers fought against him, and prevailed! You may survive if you join Iblees, but you will lose your life and soul doing so. The deities are strong, and give all the good in the world. Do not deny this obvious truth." Fengric stopped there, and said nothing more. And walked off hearing the uproar against the man speaking his rubbish.

11) A person walks up and asks you, "Why does God allow suffering to continue?"

Fengric looked at the man and said "God continues to test our belief in him, this is why he does so. You may believe that this sadness will continue forever, but believe in God so that in this life, or the afterlife he will bring you wisdom and joy in amounts no one can fathom. God wants us to forgive him for what little he has done, as he has forgiven us for all the sadness and pain our world has caused." Fengric took off his helmet and stared at the man with his vivid blue eyes until the man said "Thank you.. May Aeriel and Gazardiael bless you till your end." Fengric smiled, put his helmet back on, and continued to walk.

Denied

Main Problem is still with the Shade. They aren't greedy and after money. They aren't petty thieves.

[Fengric 68]

Denied

Main Problem is still with the Shade. They aren't greedy and after money. They aren't petty thieves.

You hadn't before mentioned that the Shade was a problem, but I see where you are coming from. I edited my previous post (Hopefully for the last time..) rather than re-posting so I don't clog up the topic. I made the shade seem a lot more in-character for someone who spends his time praising an evil god.. and murdering innocent people...

[Thrym 188]

You hadn't before mentioned that the Shade was a problem, but I see where you are coming from. I edited my previous post (Hopefully for the last time..) rather than re-posting so I don't clog up the topic. I made the shade seem a lot more in-character for someone who spends his time praising an evil god.. and murdering innocent people...

Ah, I'm getting my apps confused and thought I had said Shade the first time. On a side note, ACCEPTED. There are still a few small things but your dedication and ability to improve has impressed me.

[Fengric 68]

-deleted by me, rawr-

[Fengric 68]

Ah, I'm getting my apps confused and thought I had said Shade the first time. On a side note, ACCEPTED. There are still a few small things but your dedication and ability to improve has impressed me.

I would like to apply my character as a Paladin.

[Braxis 813]

I would like to apply my character as a Paladin.

The path of Cleric/ Paladin is decided in game once your char tell the prophet the answer to some questions asked I will give ypu once i get online[]

[ipod]

[Fengric 68]

The path of Cleric/ Paladin is decided in game once your char tell the prophet the answer to some questions asked I will give ypu once i get online[]

[ipod]

Okay, thanks.. I am still in a week ban, so I will be able to get back on tomorrow :D

[mr.gerp 21]

1)MC Name & RP Name: OOC: deavs RP: Aerin

2)Chosen Patron: Aeriel for she is the caretaker of souls

3)Reason For Joining (do not have the reason be to become Ascended): OOC: The clerics look like an interesting guild to be in. RP: Aerin wishes to become a better person and overcome his cowardly instincts.

4)Race: Dark Elf

5)Flaws in Your Character: Aerin is bit cowardly and is slow to put himself in danger unless the odds are incredibly in his favor.

6) How long have you been on the server: A few months.

Scenario Questions-Answer how you would react to each situation.

7) You notice an Apprentice Shade harassing a lowly citizen. [shades Are Evil Mages]

Aerin hears some voices while walking through Solace: one of an angry man, and the other of a very quiet man. Aerin peaks around the corner to see two people arguing, one dressed in black robes and the other dressed in rags. Aerin watches the exchange go on for a few minutes too afraid to get involved. Then the man in black starts to speak evil words of power. It seems to Aerin that the man in black is about to kill the man, so Aerin quickly draws his crossbow and fires a bolt at him hopefully giving the chance for the ragged man to run away. Then Aerin quickly darts away , fearing the wrath of the shade.

8)You see a small child shivering in the snow.

As Aerin is walking on the road at night, Aerin spots a small child shivering in the snow. After spotting the child Aerin runs quickly to help him. Aerin picks up the human child from the snow. And then he ran as quickly as he could with the human child to a nearby cave. After gently setting the child down, he then wraps the child in his coat. After that Aerin started a fire to keep them warm. In the morning Aerin took the child to a nearby inn and gives him a pouch of money to pay for food and lodging.

9) You are walking down the road when a bandit stops you and threatens to kill you if you don't give him all your money and valuables.

Aerin: I do not wish to harm you! Do not hurt me, I have your valuables!

Bandit: Alright then hand them over!

Aerin: Take them, but please I beg of you to never harm anyone walking this path ever again, for I fear the consequence on your soul if you do so.

Bandit: Heh, sure I'll think about that.

Aerin runs as fast as he can to the nearest town. Aerin immediately alerts the guards to the bandits presence for he fears that the Bandit did not listen to his advice and will be harming others.

10) As you walk through the local market place a person begins to yell that Aeriel and the other patrons are weak and cruel and claims that joining Iblees is the only way to survive.

Aerin pushes through the crowd and asks: "Why do you believe the patrons are weak and cruel?"

The man replies: "The patrons could not save Aegis, could they? They demand unquestioning obedience and provide nothing in return for us. Iblees spotted this misjustice and decided to destroy Aerial and her corrupt followers. In a desperate attempt to defeat Iblees they destroyed Aegis in an attempt to trap him in the void!"

Aerin: "You are wrong. In return for obedience the Ascended gained the power of Aenguls. They spread the healing magic of Aerial across the land. It is true that Iblees did try to destroy Aerial. But the history that you preach is riddled with lies and falsehoods. Perhaps you should take time to think that you have been contradicting yourself. You have said the Patrons are weak, yet you claim they have destroyed Aegis. You say that the Patrons could not save Aegis, then you claim that the Patrons destroyed Aegis."

The Man: "Iblees O-only wishes for-"

Aerin: "Silence. The guard shall decide what will be done with you."

11) A person walks up and asks you, "Why does God allow suffering to continue?"

It is a question that I ask myself sometimes. God did create suffering as a chance to better ourselves. Not everything can be good. With suffering God gives us the chance to be aware of what is wrong in this world and try our best to fix it. Without suffering you would be as bad as the hellspawn of Iblees. For they do not care for the welfare of other beings, because Iblees has removed their suffering, skeptisism, and fear. As an inventor, God is testing us as creations to see if we side with him or the side of evil. Or more specifically, if we will help alleviate our suffering, or will create suffering for others.

[Thrym 188]

1)MC Name & RP Name: OOC: deavs RP: Aerin

2)Chosen Patron: Aeriel for she is the caretaker of souls

3)Reason For Joining (do not have the reason be to become Ascended): OOC: The clerics look like an interesting guild to be in. RP: Aerin wishes to become a better person and overcome his cowardly instincts.

4)Race: Dark Elf

5)Flaws in Your Character: Aerin is bit cowardly and is slow to put himself in danger unless the odds are incredibly in his favor.

6) How long have you been on the server: A few months.

Scenario Questions-Answer how you would react to each situation.

7) You notice an Apprentice Shade harassing a lowly citizen. [shades Are Evil Mages]

Aerin watches the exchange go on for a few minutes too afraid to get involved. It seems to Aerin that the shade is about to kill the man, so Aerin quickly draws his crossbow and fires a bolt at the shade hopefully giving the chance for the man to run away. Then Aerin quickly darts away , fearing the wrath of the shade.

8)You see a small child shivering in the snow.

Aerin picks up the child from the snow, and carries him to a nearby cave. Aerin then wraps the child in his coat. After that Aerin starts a fire to keep them warm. In the morning Aerin takes the child to a nearby inn and gives him some money to pay for food and lodging.

9) You are walking down the road when a bandit stops you and threatens to kill you if you don't give him all your money and valuables.

Aerin: I do not wish to harm you, have my valuables. But I beg of you to never harm anyone walking this path ever again, for I fear the consequence on your soul if you do so.

Bandit: Heh, sure I'll think about that.

Aerin walks to the nearest town and alerts the guards to the bandits presence for he fears that the Bandit did not listen to his advice.

10) As you walk through the local market place a person begins to yell that Aeriel and the other patrons are weak and cruel and claims that joining Iblees is the only way to survive.

Aerin pushes through the crowd and asks: "Why do you believe the patrons are weak and cruel?"

The man replies: "The patrons could not save Aegis, could they? They demand unquestioning obedience and provide nothing in return for us. Iblees spotted this misjustice and decided to destroy Aerial and her corrupt followers. In a desperate attempt to defeat Iblees they destroyed Aegis in an attempt to trap him in the void!"

Aerin: "You are wrong. In return for obedience the Ascended gained the power of Aenguls. They spread the healing magic of Aerial across the land. It is true that Iblees did try to destroy Aerial. But the history that you preach is riddled with lies and falsehoods. Perhaps you should take time to think that you have been contradicting yourself. You have said the Patrons are weak, yet you claim they have destroyed Aegis. You say that the Patrons could not save Aegis, then you claim that the Patrons destroyed Aegis."

The Man: "Iblees O-only wishes for-"

Aerin: "Silence. The guard shall decide what will be done with you."

11) A person walks up and asks you, "Why does God allow suffering to continue?"

It is a question that I ask myself sometimes. God did create suffering as a chance to better ourselves. Not everything can be good. God is testing us as creations to see if we side with him or the side of evil. I believe he wants to see if he can give everlasting love to us, then we can give everlasting love to him.

Denied.

The app is very good, just expand your scenario answers a bit. You are very close!

[Fengric 68]

Do we have a place to build the guild decided yet? Or is that done already