Farren frowns slightly, coughing into his hand as he shuffles in his chair.
"Just by looking at this map, it's already clear to me that this is not viable or entirely beneficial for our people. This is mainly to do so with the location plots. I'll elaborate with some key points:
Firstly, neither of the three locations are suitable. One of the primary reasons is that the monks own some of the Lands you've requested.
Another is the fact that it would not be beneficial for the inhabitants of Kal'Ithrun to have a town in front of them nearby the road from Cloud Temple. If you ever decided to turn on us, you could attempt to imitate the White Rose, blocking at least of the major paths coming from Cloud Temple. Barring access to our people, similar to what your kind tried during the last war.
Trade is another issue, if we're to have any towns they should be behind Kal'Ithrun. When people enter our Lands, they should enter Kal'Ithrun first, not stop by other towns. The Humans made this mistake when they built Salvus, and ended up destroying it. I don't see why we should try to repeat such foolishness. Otherwise we'll be faced with this new town that would leach from us, before eventually devouring us it's host.
So to put it simply, I would disagree with it's creation if they used any of those locations. Although I admit this is partly due to me not trusting the long'un, with the recent incident caused by the Adunians and past ones by other Jarls. It's become apparent that Vassals in my eyes are not beneficial for our people, unless run by a trustworthy dwarf. Might you consider another location? One a tad more obscure so that it will not impede upon the growth of our Capital?
Maybe yer can take over Barbek or somefin?
Thoughts Me'King an of'er Lords?
((Written in common to make it easier to understand. Even with all the good intentions, a city in front of our Capital is not beneficial to us. It's never has been for the Dwarves or frankly other nations. Leaching roleplay from the Capital. Salvus, outer Kal'Urguan and Vaerhaven are prime examples of this. Ultimately this isn't really in the best interest of a player base trying that's trying to expand and improve in my opinion. As vassals have always kinda leached roleplay from us, like parasites.))