Unfortunately, your application has been denied for the following reasons:
>Despite the server being named “Lord of the Craft”, there is no elven settlement named Rivendell. Please see this guide here for a list of elven kingdoms/settlements.
>Please mention at least 2 lore references into your backstory. This could be the name of a city or kingdom, a religion, a war or major event.
>Please define the subrace of elf your character is: Snow elf, high elf, dark elf, or wood elf?
>Why does your character dislike orcs? Perhaps you could explore this character trait further in Ranir’s back story.
>Your roleplay scenario should mostly focus on what your character is saying, not an NPC. Be aware that on the server, you would emote Ranir making the attempt to punch the man, and the attempt to break his arm. Otherwise, it’s considered power-gaming (which you did define very well, in truth).
>Generally, be aware of proper spelling, punctuation, and grammar. Since it’s a text-based Roleplay server, it’s important that your fellow roleplayers understand what you’re trying to say.
You’re more than welcome to re-submit a new application and try again with these things in mind. If you have any further questions, feel free to check out our new player discord, or you can send me a message at #dream9012