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Nazark is proud to have been able to keep the horn safe, having brought it from city to city and realm to realm, until the Yar clan could once again rise to prominence.

You truly just refuse to answer why they grow a new head. Them eating somebody else isn’t a sufficient explanation for this. It’s totally unnatural and comes out of nowhere and you attribute a magical ability to be innate to a descendant race without explanation. I’d be more accepting of this if you could manage to somehow explain that growing a new head was a result of evolution, mutation, a curse, magic, a spell, some kind of surgery, a fusing of souls, anything; though we don’t have that here. You’re just dropping that they grow a new head without fair justification. Why don’t uruks or dwed grow new heads if they eat somebody? Give something for your lore to stand on. Writing new and fun lore for fantasy is fun but it needs a basis that can be explained – the entire point of suspending disbelief is because we do so in order to give the storyteller a chance to explain things later on. With your submission you’re essentially asking for an indefinite suspension of disbelief with no answers for each player that interacts with these newly changed ologs.

((just ftb it

May the ancestors welcome our fellow spiritualist home.

Nazark’Gorkil frowns, having helped to stop a Renalian assassination by two goblins on the same day.

o7 Don’t look back, brother

C, just don’t let single servers drop off or else **** gets fishy

on novaskin.me and shading using GIMP software and you’ll mostly just practice at the start, then do the tailor’s guild when you have the hang of things, and then you may begin to get requests when you get even better.

skinning

well of course

Nazark shrugs

Ayo? I absolutely didn’t read this but it’s long as **** and looks cool. Good work, Coolio and good luck.

“We ztill hav much praktiz to do regarding our formationz.” remarks the Motsham to anybody who will listen

Is this just edgy farseeing?

Nazark’Gorkil makes a ? face, as his old friend has clearly no understanding of the current state of Krugmar.

YALL DONT WANT THIS SMOKE

This formality only has to be done in response to raids, right? Other rallies are fine without the bell?

then it should be explained as such in the lore, simple as that.

Just because Lur was the first to tame them, and some of the clan members have relations to him, doesn’t explain why the creatures become inherently exclusive to the clan. What is special about the bloodline? Lur’s bloodline doesn’t have innately magical abilities tied to the wolves, unless you’ve neglected to explain them. Though furthermore, if the matter is that anybody with Lur’s blood can tame a wolf then it’s possible that orcs who are outside of Lur clan may come from Lur’s lineage and be able to tame a wolf. There are of course far more documented cases of wolves attacking children, let’s not be ridiculous here. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/List_of_wolf_attacks You can look through that and you’ll find wolves attacking people of all ages over the last few centuries. So again, you should really explain why Lur Wolves seem to have a superior and innate ethical code to that of other beasts. It’s one thing to train an animal to only attack certain things, it’s entirely another thing to ingrain it into the lore of the creature. That’s fine but you really should explain why a bond with a non-magical creature lasts multiple generations in the way that you’ve described. It’s cool to write up that Lur Wolves won’t attack distant descendants of Lur because of their blood or whatever, but you need to justify that with some kind of explanation. Wolves can’t really smell genetics either, so there are many different routes that you could write up to achieve what you want still but as of this current submission I don’t think it’s sufficiently explained. Will this not lead to all Lurs /always/ walking with their wolves and if they are attacked the Lur persona would essentially be emoting for the wolf and their orc? In the redlines I think you explain that it takes 3 emotes to command the wolf, though it seems like if a Lur was just attacked they wouldn’t exactly need to give specific commands to fight off an assailant. Maybe I’m wrong but I’d love some more clarification.