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[✗] [Magic Lore] Eshtael's Seraphs

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I love @ibleesian

You did a great job with this! Easy to read and quite flavorful.

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I love @ibleesian more

Also, I really like the flavor of this magic. You did a great job with the writing. Grandfather me plz and thank you.

 

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didn't cite me


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some of the abilities don’t make sense with the theme and eshtael’s “thing”, i’d elaborate but i’m too lazy to 

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You can tell she put a lot of time and effort into trying to make it lore-feasible and mechanically balanced- not to mention the formatting is VERY pretty. Nice job c:

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if im not grandfathered to this magic/feat/CA, watch the news, any channel.

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Cool stuff. I'm not CRP brained enough to speak on any of the combat spells or lorebrained enough to think on how most of the sacraments or rituals could raise any lore issues or anything, but there are two things that stick out to me as (potential) issues.

 

- Vaults. The idea is cool in theory, but I have some concerns about creating the ability to basically soft-PK literally anyone / anything if I understand the ability correctly. While all the stuff about ensuring it is not behind too many doors and accessible in some way, along with being able to manifest prophecies about oneself being sealed away, could alleviate this to an extent, I still have some doubts as to the safety of letting this out into the world. I'm sure it would almost never get used on some random person who doesn't have some reason to be getting sealed away (i.e. some great force of good or evil who is upsetting the balance), but I still worry.

- The Sacrament of Binding. Specifically, the bit about extending the respawn timer for 3 days. This seems somewhat random and arbitrary, to me at least. Again, I imagine this sacrament should, in theory, never be used on anyone aside from those who upset universal balance. But, again, I still worry.

 

In truth these might be non-issues since I imagine any poor-faith use of these could / would be voided. But my doomer self immediately imagines all the ways they could be abused or misused.

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