Aelu / Rel (Combustionary)

The dark corridors of the hole which the Dark Family called home have gone quiet. The torches seem to have been smothered, and were one to venture the darkness, only a single lit room would remain. ​This source of light emanates from a single torch hanging over the dining room. Below, a body lies on the table. Were this hypothetical adventurer to investigate, he would see that it was cleaned and dressed up. There is only a dot of blood on his right shoulder's cloth, and a larger stain at his throat. His dead eyes stare upwards. The corpse of the "Dark Family"'s leader, known to most as "Viro" and to some as his pseudonym "The Harbinger" seems almost peaceful. Were our delver unhindered by this morbid sight, he might notice a small note clasped between both of Viro's hands. "There can be but one Negoti"

A new note is left by the message. "I've a contract for you. Some assassin, fashions himself as 'The Harbinger'. Five-hundred for his head." No signature is left, aside from a small blotch of red paint.

The Negotii of the defunct Dark Brotherhood sighs. "Oh, come on"

This actually sounds pretty good. I support it.

Perhaps it's because a group of respected villains don't want to be associated with you? I'm going to be honest, and I don't mean it as an insult (Though I've no doubt you'll take it as one). In the last day alone, I've seen the PMs between you and a friend, I've seen you try to burn down a building with forum rp, I've seen you try to give yourself loreless powers, I've seen you beg oocly for dark magics, and I've seen this (very) lacking lore. I'll repeat myself - I'm not trying to attack you. I'm not trying to make fun of you. I'm trying to help you. People don't respect you for the stuff you've tried. If you're a troll, this is probably what you've wanted. If you're not... please read what I'm going to type. I legitimately want to help you. Asking around for dark magic? People laugh at you. You don't get that by asking nicely and being edgy as all get out. This alone is excusable, a lot of new players do it... but unlike them, you seem not to want to take 'no' for an answer. In response... you've tried every trick in the book to make yourself the special edgeflake that you wanted from necromancy. You've tried to be the evil bad guy with powers nobody approved. You've tried to burn things down on the forums... and when that failed, you tried to make half-assed lore to get those powers. Stop this. I'll repeat myself once more - I'm trying to give you advice so that people won't laugh at the mere mention of your name. If you want to get something, go in-game, and try. Build up your character. Make yourself something that's more than the most generic edgy villain ever seen. Put work into. Right now, you're expecting results from nothing and whining when that gets you nowhere. Necromancer's don't want to live with you? Why should they. Why would an old, well cemented group want to live with an obviously unstable, weak, person? OOCly, why would they want their names in the same breath as yours? If you actually take advice from people, and listen, chances are more will like you. If, on this lore, you actually edited things as people suggested, and molded it to be better, perhaps people would like it more than the current unanimous dislike. One last time, I'm only trying to help you.

Explain this to me. How is criticism harassment? And before you reply, read this. It'll help you form an argument. First you provide a claim, such as After your claim, you need to provide evidence and reason. How is what I'm saying harassment, rather than just feedback? What proof do you have that it is considered harassment? I really do want to know why you're saying these things, but all you seem to post is circular logic and laughable threats. Please, enlighten us. And you do realize that you can't really rickroll somebody when they can see the title before it starts... right? And wait now you're admitting to being a troll?

It does? Huh. Good thing nobody here's harassing the thread or degrading it for any reason other that it's not good. :) Now, I know you're a troll. Really the only reason I'm still posting is because my internet's crapping out too much to play WoW. But, let's go on with this. Nobody's doing this for personal reasons. There are numerous problems with your lore. Most of them have been pointed out. Fix them, and people my take it better.

Please show me where my topics are flawed. I beg of you. And lol reddit. And a word of advice, 'demanding' things of the staff doesn't work too well, bud.

...And when I said it was awfully wrong, I meant your own lore. I meant that it's your responsibility to fix it. The LMs aren't going to hold your hand so you can get super evil man!!1 In which case, I heavily advise you make that clear in the lore. It's vague as hell. Again, I'm pointing out some of the extremely numerous flaws in your lore. If I shared my opinions on you, then it would be an attack, but I am only sharing my opinions on your lore. And what's my skype have to do with anything?

No, I'm pointing out flaws because your lore is very, very heavily flawed. I'm trying to be constructive, but you seem intent on defending it. Not the part I was referring to - My concern is the last line where it speaks of his victims not returning. Can't do this. No way you can do this. There are no 'loopholes' to the no-PK rule. You can't make up a reason as to why your victim wouldn't be able to revive, if oocly, he wants to revive. It's your responsibility to make your lore compatible with the server's, not the LMs. Plus, it's not a 'minor' change. This lore takes some massive freedoms with runes.

Almost certain that's not how it works. 99% so. I'd suggest asking an LM if runes can do that, otherwise you'd need to get those accepted before you can even hope for this to be. Also, at the end of your lore you mentioned people not returning from the CT. Are you trying to say this could force-PK? Your lore is so vague on everything, I have to ask this.