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this is a planned feature, ps

Khurmt* and that is barely related to this creature lore. I don’t see how you would even think this is a meme creature, lore is clearly extensive and the idea is there, there’s nothing memey about it more than Kha or Hou’zi. yes.

didn’t talk about haelun’or and their acid pits, -1

please let me be a frog flam please mega +1

[ ! ] Posters are spread throughout Arcas by one of Toriel Maddison’s fabled servants seeking for experienced hunters to slay a beast that roams across a land known as the Graveyard. The following details the beast in question – drawn out by scouts who have observed the creature over several years to give the highest chance of survival to whomever challenges it. A scout artist drawing of the golem, circa 1713 Wanted: A golem made from logs that appears to possess a ‘corrupted’ aura, named Incommodum. Threat Level: Described from scouts, “posses abilities no creature before has been known to possess” – extremely dangerous. Suggested Party Number: 4-6 fully-geared hunters with able experience. Description of beast: Having the figure of a normal human male, it’s body made from a thick bark and it’s “meat” made from solid wood. It’s right hand having sharp branches extending outwards from it, looking like fingers – seven counted in total, of which don’t appear to move. On it’s left hand, a ball of ‘magic’ pulsates, aqua blue in color, it’s been observed to have capabilities of shooting a harmful beam of what could only be described as a type of sorcery. The beasts’ feet appear to be stumps and it’s head looking to have several large branches extend outwards from it, an odd light is visible through it’s visor-like skull, of which moss hangs over it. It moves sluggishly and looks to be roughly eighteen feet in height, not counting the branches extending outwards from it’s head. It’s width around five feet through it’s hard to determine. Location: The Graveyard, varies on the specific spot but always spotted in that generalized area. Reward: A sum of 1750 mina to be split throughout the party, and one Toriel Token redeemable for special items at select stores*. Accepting this bounty binds you to the terms of service set in place by Toriel Maddison in which you may not take any parts or items retrieved from the beast. Though – without adieu – If you think you have the gut and might to take on such a beast, then please send a missive back at once. If you attempt to cross me, Toriel Maddison, then we shall do business no more and you will regret the day you did so. Signed, Toriel Maddison, Entrepreneur of Rare Creatures, Collector of Oddities, Finder of the Unknown (Send me a forum PM or contact me at Talavok#3594 via Discord to exchange a time)

[ ! ] Posters are spread throughout Arcas by one of Toriel Maddison’s fabled servants seeking for experienced hunters to slay a beast that lies in a forbidden forest. The following details the beast in question – depicted by other hunters whom have failed to tackle the creature previously. An artists depiction of the creature, circa 1713 Wanted: A seemingly cursed ent named Consceleratus. Threat Level: Described by other previous parties as “deadly” and to avoid it at all costs. Suggested Party Number: 5-6 able-bodies, geared to the teeth preferably. Description of beast: A prematurely cursed pine tree, stuck at a height of twenty feet and roughly seven feet in width, going slimmer as you ascend upwards. It has a large gaping mouth with outputs a lime green glowing aura from it, the mouth itself reaching near six feet and capable of fitting a fully grown man inside. It has two elongated arms, size undetermined, that end with sharp branches that look like fingers. It has five legs, each the same size – similar to that of a spider. The eyes of the creature are oddly located at the base of it, just above it’s root-like legs. At the top of it, twigs extend outwards where supposed leaves used to sit. Now – it is sharpened into a weapon, it’s body able to bend without breaking. It is highly aggressive and relentless. Location: Varies from forest to forest but often located in a dark woods not far from Cloud Temple, as scouts most recently reported. Rewards: A sum of 1750 mina to be split throughout the party, and one Toriel Token redeemable for special items at select stores*. Accepting this bounty binds you to the terms of service set in place by Toriel Maddison in which you may not take any parts or items retrieved from the beast. Though – without adieu – If you think you have the gut and might to take on such a beast, then please send a missive back at once. If you attempt to cross me, Toriel Maddison, then we shall do business no more and you will regret the day you did so. Signed, Toriel Maddison, Entrepreneur of Rare Creatures, Collector of Oddities, Finder of the Unknown (Send me a forum PM or contact me at Talavok#3594 via Discord to exchange a time)

Then why upload a unfinished product? That makes no sense. Given the time frames between each post, you’ve gave these no previous thought and are writing them up on the spot on your phone which doesn’t give any consideration to how these would actually play out in a war. You’re just coming up with things on the spot with no previous thought. Seems all a bit sketch to me.

“Silver elves disgust me, I doubt the corrupted state would accept this challenge.” says a certain Wood Elf

Over half of this lore post is just a copy and paste from your other three pieces and it just relates to backstory and not even the actual piece, yikes yikes yikes. Also, most of your suggestions to how it works don’t fall in line with how current war claims go, I suggest you read the rules and talk with people before trying to make up this kind of stuff.

I’m sorry but most these sentences are pretty incomprehensible and it’s littered with word, spelling and grammar mistakes. Plus the lore is so vague, without a picture it’s just hard to picture what exactly you’re trying to do here. -1 (Also I think this already exists or it’s really something you don’t have to submit a lore submission for..) The same can be said for your other two posts.

Yay Community Team!

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If you ever need any help, let me know yo!

I’d rather get an actual job paying minimum wage then haha. That sounds like hell.

Godwin smiles and thanks Nikolas for the well done maps.

He needs to fill out the proper bug report form. @jdesarno

Nah, keep them dead, thanks

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You can message me on Discord at Talavok#3594 and I’d be glad to help.