Sky 0 Share Posted October 20, 2019 Neat. 1 Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ixli 1471 Share Posted November 1, 2019 I think the necromancy community values Dardonas’ rewrite and it still meets all the requirements and suggestions necessary; solid attempt, though. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Qizu 4038 Share Posted November 2, 2019 I actually like this one a lot. The amount of the work put into this submission is great and I like how things are simplified so it doesn’t take much of a hassle to understand as I am an outsider to Necromancy magic. So therefore I give this a +1 and cannot wait to see this in the server! 1 Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Legendd 25 Share Posted November 2, 2019 I have to say that this rewrite is very much clear and detailed to the point of describing the features and abilities of necromancy so that its easy to understand. The red-lines are also very well drawn out. This focuses down the art towards characteristics and capabilities that are appropriate to the theme of this magic while also still allowing the user room for a bit of imagination. 1 Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
GodEmperorFlam 3447 Share Posted November 14, 2019 Thank you for submitting your Lore Games draft! You will receive input on what needs to be fixed within the next 2 weeks. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
GodEmperorFlam 3447 Share Posted December 18, 2019 This lore has been denied. You will be sent a forum PM regarding the reasons for denial within the next 24 hours. I apologize in advance for the delay, things are rather hectic at the moment as most people have had finals. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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