Pandasan

Thanks for using my moon pool ;-;

I agree completely with him! This section of the lore really caught my attention - probably because I'm a hexing freak, but whatever! Anyway, the most a witchdoctor's curse could probably extend is a week! And that's with OOC consent! A regular curse is about a day-to-two days, depending on your tier. I am against the cursing section because, like, Evocress mentioned, there are already two (maybe three because mysticism?) wonderful magics that can already curse. Not to mention, they have a wide variety of curses to cast. You even mentioned that it is similar to soul puppetry cursing... which is... meh. If you want cursing and necromancy, just become a soul puppeteer and a necromancer. No need to add that on to this rewrite when you've got some good magics right already in place! (Also, your cursing is very powerful... like super powerful... wow) Bottom line, I agree with Evocress a lot! As a suggestion to help you with this piece? I have nothing, but Evocress' amends look decent!

It was a nice, small piece to read! Some avatars, I dislike because they need work; however, others are neat-o. Anyway! Personally, I would like to see more done with the current avatars before considering adding more. Should more avatars - specifically these - wish to be added, some revision should be considered!

Great lore! I love it +1

Pretty!

I agree. It shouldn't entirely make you infertile. Just make it more difficult to produce offspring since that is what the Curse is.

Interesting video. However, I still do not agree with complete infertility. Especially with half-breeds in the past who have mated and produced offspring. Infertility should only be applied with the Elven curse.

I do not agree with this at all. Can you give a more in-depth explanation as to why they should- or are- infertile? Otherwise, the other clarifications are good.

uh oh

A little girl approaches one of the notes and giggles and begins to write in blue ink: "Go to Sanctuary, silly. Also, I don't think payment or having incorrect spelling will help you in any way!" She laughs another time before leaving.

As much as I love Chocobo's I'd rather not see them in lotc. I see creature lore being implemented, yet hardly see them continue for long. We've got piggies and horsies. Dress them up.

please no... Kha's got birdies. no mas.

Oh, my goodness! This is probably one of the only lores I've actually read through the whole thing. The magic idea was soooo interesting and I'm impressed. Your role-play scenarios appear so appealing for the magic to be role-played. Good job, on the well-written lore. You've got my support. I hope to see this. +1

On the bright side, you can design a character to be like this and not have to develop a totally new race! It's nice and simple. Try it~

I like the ideas, but unfortunately I'm confused on some aspects to this ignorance. How are we to react when seeing our own bodily figures that mostly represents, such as a head? The evidence is right there and the reaction to come- I find- is confusing. I usually just RP that monks reviving is a myth and you probably didn't die and just passed out, but then someone came along to heal you. All in all, this is a fantastic solution in the makings +1.