Your application is now;
Your metagaming and powergaming definitions are incorrect, please refer to the wiki pages provided. [Metagaming] [Powergaming]
Your characters backstory started well, but began to fall apart as you introduced the usage of magic and nonsensical character traits. Please remove the mentioning of lightning bolts, the God’s Blade and Lightning Warden, none of these things exist on Lord of the Craft. Alongside that, please expand on who your character is on a person, this is a much better approach than just trying to add powers to him.
Your character’s hair should not have lightning crackling within it.
Your character should not be one of these ‘Wardens’ and should not be able to wield an element, however, you may learn one of our evocations in game from a teacher once you’ve been accepted.
Please replace your ‘superhero’ weaknesses and strengths with things that will build your characters personality, our server is not about being the best or the most powerful, and isn’t ran on constant combat roleplay.
If you need any help with these changes, please contact me on Discord @pump action hex#4689, or join the New Player Discord through the link below.