Alright simple critique here. This seems like just a consolidation of the current listed lore pieces scattered around, albeit with some strange formatting issues in the Spoilers, you should look at fixing that. It makes reading it a utter pain in the arse.
First and foremost, unless you are adding ONTO the magic, Golemancy in its original iteration was a Feat, not a MA. This is cause its only purposes are making Golems aka CA’s, and making handy dandy fake limbs for people. Unless you’ve added on some functionality that skews the balance that it rests on in regards to the rest of the magic on the server there’s really no need to increase it to take up a slot other than to curve ball 5 slot folks like Lackless and some other golem users and force them to drop it.
And in fact thats really the only issue. If you’re just working with the understanding that the current lore is fine as far as you’re concerned or something then you’ve achieved it but I cannot discern any difference between this and information spread out on the forums and wiki, up to even the Aegis’ references as if it was still glorious 2011 with it’s brilliant roadside banditry races and Tythus intact nasal cavity before the coke addicion caught up to him (This is a joke Mods don’t shoot me)
Adjust the formatting a bit, update some bits, and give a solid reason as for why it should go from being a Feat to a MA.
Cheers.