femurlord 2364 Share Posted October 28, 2023 [T3] Dholl - [Combative] A seething wreath of malflame which congeals about the Naztherak’s branded forearms, before gushing out in a wave that extends [3] meters in width and height before shooting [2] meters in front of the Warlock [1] emote after [2] emotes of opening a grimoire. This wicked spell serves to push oncoming attackers back [3] blocks, incurring [1] emote of stun and can additionally be used to offset physical projectiles up to the force of an arbalest. Per use of this spell costs [10] maleus. Redlines The force of Dholl is comparable to an Uruk's shove Dholl is [3x3] wall which will move [2] meters forward Those affected by Dholl are pushed [3] meters back and endure [1] emote of stun, where they're incapable of attacking or otherwise moving. Dholl's effects can be negated through magical or defensive wards, for example, Templarism's Bulwark. The combustive wreath of malflame can be used to offset physical projectiles up to the force of arbalest bolt, unable to fend off against any non-physical spells. [T4] Thiirth - [Combative] A cantrip spell that sees a Naztherak to lay flaming, sacrilegious pentacles over a landscape that when stepped on roar out with a terrible, fiery mouth to latch onto the unsuspecting [2] emotes after [2] emotes of opening their grimoire. In a [12] meter range which requires line of sight, the Naztherak can summon a pentacle of malflame in a 1x1 space. When stepped on a great, fuming maw lurches to restrict a victim. The fiery jaws of this trap can be escaped with [1] emote of struggling free. Per use of this spell costs a total of [20] maleus. Redlines Thiirth cantrips endure [6] emotes after being summoned. The force of the trap's jaw is equivalent to a bear trap, able to rend flesh and break bone unprotected by armor or thick leather Summoning Thiirth requires line of sight. Thiirth can be summoned with [12] meter range. Thiirth cannot be moved after summoning has begun. Thiirth requires the placement of a sign and clear indication in an emote of where it was placed. Thiirth must be placed on solid ground, unable to attach to ceilings or walls. 7 Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
𝙻𝚞𝚟 XO 3066 Share Posted October 28, 2023 (it won’t f*cking load but it’s-) +1 Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mannamannaa 1626 Share Posted October 28, 2023 Soo... is this an edit? Added abilities? What reasoning is given for these abilities to provide additional function/utility/flavor to the magic? What is an emote of stun and how is it roleplayed by the target? Does this Dholl act as a 3 emote into coup-de-grace combo piece, especially on a field with multiple combatants? Can this be blocked by defensive spells, armor, wards, etcetera? ...I have a lot of questions, these seem like great concepts yet the finer redlines might need a bit more fleshing out. 3 Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
TreeSmoothie 4898 Share Posted October 28, 2023 3 hours ago, Mannamannaa said: Soo... is this an edit? Added abilities? What reasoning is given for these abilities to provide additional function/utility/flavor to the magic? What is an emote of stun and how is it roleplayed by the target? Does this Dholl act as a 3 emote into coup-de-grace combo piece, especially on a field with multiple combatants? Can this be blocked by defensive spells, armor, wards, etcetera? ...I have a lot of questions, these seem like great concepts yet the finer redlines might need a bit more fleshing out. All spells like this are more or less written the same An addition means an added ability, an emote of stun is usually up to the player, just means a '1 emote you can't do anything besides struggling to get up', can be blocked by whatever is antimagic to Naztherak, etc Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Turbo_Dog 1432 Share Posted October 28, 2023 6 hours ago, femurlord said: Warlock [1] emote after [2] emotes of opening a grimoire. I believe this could be worded more clearly by saying for [1] emote after [2] casting emotes or charging emotes. +1 1 Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
ClassyDryad 1733 Share Posted October 28, 2023 Maybe add them as benefits for devoting additional slots? From what I've seen of current Naz lore there isn't much reason to spend more than a single extra slot on it. 1 Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
rukio 8910 Share Posted October 28, 2023 Didn't Naz just get a rewrite or smth? Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
NLThomas 1065 Share Posted October 28, 2023 36 minutes ago, rukio said: Didn't Naz just get a rewrite or smth? Does that stop from an addition being written? 1 Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
MeteorDragon 2822 Share Posted October 28, 2023 7 hours ago, femurlord said: Dholl is [2x2] wall which will move [2] meters forward This says 2x2 but the description of the spell says 3x3 Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
rukio 8910 Share Posted October 28, 2023 24 minutes ago, NLThomas said: Does that stop from an addition being written? No but if it's a newer rewrite then maybe give it more time to see if it's really a necessary addition or not. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Orphvius 424 Share Posted October 28, 2023 +1 Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Islamadon 4429 Share Posted November 28, 2023 This lore has been denied. You will be sent a forum PM regarding the reasons for denial within the next 24 hours. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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