Slic3man

If the current generation of mages had a standardized strength they'd be going by then I think this would be more viable; right now a mage's strength is mostly arbitrary and left to RP. If there were a norm that was established, I think this would be more viable. For the time being, I think this will only make people think that it removes any weakness due to the current way magic is RP'd, (not that it's entirely true.)

LotC lore doesn't seem coherent enough.

Kek.

I think it was just a neat idea to be made so that there would be these beings that are fervent worshippers of different gods and the spirit was an origin but not a main factor in the entire thing. That's just me though. I don't think it'll go too far if it's made too connected to Shamans, it's supposed to be more varied than that by the sounds of it. They cannot learn magic, the lore says that.

At what point will the Ascended realize their leader betrayed Aerial's wishes by being a soul in an enderpearl instead of in its natural cycle? When will mech technology spread to the Orcs so they can proceed to become Big Bosses from Warhammer?

Gross.

While the lore in itself is a good write (although a bit lengthy for its actual explanation,) it seems to really only add onto blood magic's already expansive skill-set and abilities. Although it's slightly different from Arcane Displacement, I feel as though this would do better as an attachment to their magic as it is their particular specialty and purpose, as opposed to a summoning/empowerment/creation magic that's pretty plump in content already. I don't see many instances in which this would legitimately provide much RP for anyone aside from the Blood Mages and their associates, as it only gives those that enter the experience of it as opposed to a summoning ritual that would actually interact with people. From my POV it's a means to gain more for the magic, albeit not maliciously, and provide more for the group itself rather than the playerbase itself. My main thought is that it doesn't really provide much RP to anyone other than the Blood Mages and only allows for more capabilities as opposed to other places of magic that don't want to take as much time writing up lore such as this or find it unnecessary as they're not as much of a niche group. There's a lot to be done with the way Blood Magic currently is and I don't think it needs anything else to tack on because of an idea that was had about it. I fail to see how it enables players to become their own antagonists as well. There's a lot to say about it, but all in all it just doesn't seem like it's going to genuinely give anything to anyone except for those who know it, which might not even be all the blood mages in the already tight knit conglomerate it has going for it. It reads like there's a lot of fluff to the writing to make it larger to the eye and simpler explanations would've been better for something that altogether is looking into other planes of existence and going into them. Like I said, it's nicely written. I don't mean for this to be an insult but I wanted to throw the two cents in there along with some criticism.

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Kratos = Shitposting Hades = LotC Souls of the Damned = Playerbase Harpies = Administration Outside of the Palace = Outside of Mother's House

It seems like it's a way to implement the magic that was denied previously, mainly from the section in which it begins to explain how the blessed human souls can effect the world and what not. The touchy subject behind it is that the Humans basically decide whoever is to ascend, and if it were the font of creation I see no reason as to why it would exclude all others. It does also seem very similar to the Spirit Realm, which doesn't separate it much from what's already put forth aside from the fact its made out to be stronger. Kind've how its described to be believed where the creator is and how all the higher deities came from it; which is somewhat of a big leap from previous lore. It being the heart of creation is a very odd and somewhat intrusive stance considering all the lore on the server currently. I think the biggest problem is the similarity to the Spirit Realm, and how regardless of those similarities it's the initial font of creation and is powerful over such; even where the Daemon of the Spirit Realm came from initially. It'd complicate a lot of things and seems like a bit of a shove as a means to get past the denial of the previous deific magic put forth.

Not to put the work down at all, but it's also plausible to emote your character having an accent and leaving it up to another player's interpretation/imagination. Probably saves a lot of confusion too.

OOC: Username: Slic3man Skype: Slic3man IC: Name: Ambriel. Race: Human. Age: 27.

I still liked you, don't be a plebeian.

An aging entity's form would receive the letter while wandering the forestry of the world. Old rust caked gauntlets would unseal it slowly, looking over the ornate letter with predefined opinions. A light flicker of turquoise would silently watch over the Archwraith's shoulder, documenting the note with all due neutrality. No sound or response would usher out, but with a meager wave of its metallic ligaments the light would move closer, and its shadowy form would nod. Vinzakra would meander off into the depths of the world, searching for their newfound meeting place, thinking on the aspect of meeting all those present.

Player Whitelisted.

Player Whitelisted.

Aight, my bad then.

Liches aren't inactive, Gravens aren't inactive, Wraiths aren't inactive, Blood Magic isn't inactive. EDIT: The Vourukh are event creatures, I don't see why they'd need removal.