Dizzy771

Can you explain a bit what this version changes from the last one that was already accepted?

I mean, I am one of the people you can message to figure out your experimentation so I fail to see how that'd be an issue.

Its made to allow a dynamic way for the ever present numbers issue within the lore to play themselves out rather then having to rely on staff. Lhindir has as equal of a chance to discover the disrupter spike, gather up people, and hunt down other golemancers as anyone else. And as I stated before: its running under a trial phase currently. If it becomes problematic I have no issues retconning it.

-=+ Golem Lore +=- -=+ What is a Golem? +=- Golems are sentient constructs, comprised of a stone body animated by a magical core. Golems can be created using Enchanting or Runesmithing. They also require one skilled in the use of the material from which they are made to make all of the parts. Usually two are required to make a golem, as it is incredibly difficult to make the part and apply the magic to it simultaneously. -=+ The Primary Lore +=- -=+ Bound Beyond Death: Soulbound Golems +=- -=+ The Golem Anvil And Golem Types +=- -=+ How Golem Cores Work +=- -=+ The Disrupter Spike +=- -=+ Miscellaneous Golem Tech +=-

Mcname(s): Vegetarianism Why he/she is blacklisted: Poor villainy and continues raiding Conditions of blacklist (temporary, permanent, until appeal, etc.): 1 month

Lightning-bound golems aren't a thing anymore. Also, multi-core golems are possible now. There is no issue with the lore.

I read it over myself and I found no real issues with it personally. I'm not sure I quite understand where you are coming from. For the first part, that it was locked during the period to a few people, that is easily explained. This character gained the knowledge through other means, research in ancient ruins or the like, or perhaps even learned it before the event that caused it to be locked down from the public. He kept his existence hidden and tried to avoid being well known. Simple as that. As for the second part... can you elaborate more?

If you want to use the dwarven language then there are a few names you could use. "Muse" doesn't really have a good translation, but if you want you could just call them "golem" or "teacher" in dwarvish: Golem = Khoren Teacher = Kronetok Coupled with "of": Of (sword OF sth) = -ram / -ethos You'd get something like "golem of" or "teacher of": Golem of = Khorenram / Khorenethos Teacher of = Kronetokram / Kronetokethos And then you can finish it with a corresponding word: Movement - brief search the closest I could find was "Fast" but I didnt look especially hard as its late right now: Fast = Vlokon Music - didnt find anything, though I can look again later Blades - "Battle" would be a suitable replacement: Battle = Krazdran History - "Remember" has been RP'd to sort of be interchangeable with "Memory", which is how dwarves define their history: Remember = Arkon - Alternatively, "Remembrancer" is usually a position in the dwarves responsible for history and lorekeeping, but it could work as well: Remembrancer = Arkonrumm Literature - Come to think of it, Remembrancer might fit this one better Art - Can't find a good one Science - Myth or Advisor? These are pretty loose but can stand if need be. You could look through and see yourself: Myth = Akkor | Advisor = Thelur Magic - Magic = Lordak Medicine - Help (Aid) is somewhat close: Help (Aid) = Ghoran To put some of these together to use as examples would be something like this: Golem of Battle = Khorenram Krazdran / Khorenethos Krazdran Golem of Help = Khorenram Ghoran / Khorenethos Ghoran Teacher of Magic = Kronetokram Lordak / Kronetokethos Lordak Of course you could always find other options as well. Such as replacing Golem / Teacher with something like Guard (Akvel) I highly suggest going over the language thread yourself and deciding what you like. Also, don't take what I've written here as total law or anything, its always possible I made an error somewhere. The thread: