The Original Spell: Rite of Scrubbing
The Amendment: Tweaking Redlines
“Amputated mystics and wights cannot perform successful scrubbing as it would demanifest their ectoplasmic limbs/weaken them.”
Changed to…
Wights cannot perform successful scrubbing as they are composed of ectoplasm and are phantasmal in nature, the ward would only weaken and bring discomfort to them as it works against their nature.
Amputated mystics may perform scrubbing, though the ward would forcefully demanifest their ectoplasmic limbs if they are present; the process being searingly painful and immediately destroying the ghostly limb–requiring the amputated mystic to go through the usual process of regenerating their arm.
If an amputated mystic’s ethereal arm isn’t manifested during the Rite, they would still experience discomfort in the form of mild phantom pains, while being incapable of forming their ectoplasmic limb due to the active ward.
Additional Redline…
If scrubbing is performed around hindered objects, plantlife, and animals–their spectral traits would be painlessly cleansed away and leave the material with a mundane appearance again.
Explanation:
Earlier today while I was conducting a lesson, I was reviewing spells and had noticed strange wording in the lore’s redlines that felt like it didn’t correctly fit well with how the spell is described and used. Rite of Scrubbing is a unique ritual for Mystics, as it doesn’t actually require ectoplasm to perform it–it actually stands as a means for warding/providing shields/barriers for spectral presences and influences [as explained above].
The original redline under the focus of the amendment describes that Amputated Mystics would have their ectoplasmic arms demanifested (correct) but then says it weakens them–which doesn’t specify how, nor explain why they would be incapable of performing the Rite with just one arm. Any Mystic is already weakened while in an area affected by Scrubbing, given they can’t cast their ectoplasm-fueled spells amidst those wards; the only additional weakness an Amputated Mystic would logically have is that absence of their spectral limb–and a greater risk to be harmed by the wards if they’re not mindful.
For the addition of a redline, there is another spell known to Mystics called Rite of Hindering–a small use of it in the form of a cantrip can permit a Mystic to imbue various items, plantlife, and live animals with ectoplasm. It’s entirely harmless and only gives them a cool visual effect, while also being a small source of attraction/comfort to spirits and wisps. It just makes sense that if Scrubbing were conducted around them, it would undo that effect on them–given Mystics are also capable of cleansing Menhirs (which is a greater product of Hindering) with this Rite.
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The Original Spell: Rite of Harvest
The Amendment: Altering the visions received in this Rite
Third paragraph down
"Once the rite is complete, the individual would find themselves winded, a brief vision pertaining to themes of the undead, spiritual, and occult playing throughout their mind - often taken as a revelatory experience, or as an ill omen, but the exact details and reaction are left to the victim's choice."
Changed to…
Once the rite is complete, the individual would find themselves winded, a brief vision pertaining to themes of the undead, spiritual, and occult playing throughout their mind - fabricated by the Mystic conducting this Rite, though the reaction to such visions is left to the victim's interpretation.
Explanation:
This spell feels as if it could have a lot of potential for Mystics to create flavorful RP interactions between other players, though a lot of power is ripped away from the Mystic when they're unable to actually influence a vision for another character to experience. It can eventually lead to awkward moments or disappointing conclusions to build up of a theme in RP when all the Mystic can do is write "Your character would have a vision pertaining to themes of the undead and occult." It's a peak behind Oz' curtain, ruining the magic and mystery of a forming narrative.
Lore in Question:
Spells mentioned:
Rite of Scrubbing
Rite of Hindering
Rite of Harvest
[Found under Sacraments of Pale]
Amputation
[Found in spoiler under Rite of Consumption]
Edit 1/4/23 - I decided to edit one of the proposed redlines that an Amputated Mystic would actually experience phantom pains while standing in a warded area, even if their arms aren't forcefully demanifested by it. My reasoning behind it is due to what grants an Amputated Mystic the ability to manifest their ghostly arms in the first place; which is an indestructible menhirous ring forever bound to their stumped limb upon application. Although it wouldn't be able to be purged by the ward, it could still provide some discomfort to the Amputated Mystic. Just makes more sense after further thought, and can add some more flavor to RP