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A simple, but elegant display of works are hung on lone boards within taverns and handed to you by street urchins and children. " Oh for what has truly beseeched me, My true purpose has been halted by what appears to be a simple man of northern look! East, perhaps? No, never with such a horrific gesture, for what do you remark me for, a Servant? For what that has been done, oh eastward man. All you wish for is the betterment of those around you. Look, for look around all that you wish to introduce the betterment to! Liar, for that is what you shall be called, a man who is a servant yet drools from the side of his mouth. Finally, this is what we wished for, for years have truly shattered the mindset of my dear old servant. Reality is what is challenged, what is reality? Oh, my, oh, my. Memories are something that many do not hold onto, but poor old easterner servant, you shall know that you will be forever cherished. To the left, we say, for we roam these lands searching for those who mimic that of the east. He himself who stands stop the mountains themselves will see their self worth, or be dragged to the cruel, Eastern king. Silence, that is for what he demands. Killing is what truly rattles most, even those of the servants that serve in the east. You shall truly understand such, for that silence comes from the cruel despot that our servant truly runs from. Begin to see, begin to look, for what encompasses this shall rattles those that lie Eastward. What lies eastward, says many? All do not know of such, of what twists and forms itself in the mind of the hard who signs. Rugged, for that is what the bard carries himself as, the rugged man of the East. Wilderness is what others believe seeks and sings to the hearts of many. Oh my, oh my. Riches are what are promised for those who do not associate with the wild, for those who abstain and break their chains will not falter. Love, for love is the tool of the eastward servant, for he roams and tries to find him. Destiny, for what many call fate, their paths shall continue to roam and intertwine. So, forth they travel and wish to find each other. Collecting dust is what these memoirs do, a lonely man who writes with sorrow about an old friend who roamed east. Oh my, oh my. Love is something he yearned for, it is something that all yearn for. Lower points have been felt, yet the lone muse did not know what happened or what compelled him anymore. I, for myself wish the best for this lone muse. Do not worry, for what is done is truly done. Eastward the servant lies, and lonesome shall be the muse. - The Lonely Muse "

HOTFIX - CHI MANIPULATION As part of the lore games blitz, we’ve seen quite a few pieces recently stand out for being almost unusable in their current forms. We’ve had instances of power-gaming from the lore piece of Chi Manipulation, but upon inspection of the lore it lacks any true guidelines and is a power-gaming paradise in its current form. So with that, the LT themselves have made the decision to shelf Chi until an applicable rewrite is made. This means that all users of Chi will be unable to teach, or utilise their magic until the appropriate rewrite has been submitted AND accepted. Hope you all are writing your lore pieces and having them prepared for review. We’re currently going over a new process in the LT that should make reviewing quicker and easier to do for our members, once we develop that then the pieces that have currently been submitted will be reviewed. Do remember, gather as much feedback as you can for them and be sure to stick to the criteria outlined throughout the lore subsection.

There are players that are around. But at the moment the Striga community are most likely not submitting a rewrite for the lore games and then shelving themselves after that period

This Lore has been denied. The reasoning will be edited into this comment within the next handful of hours. Topic moved to Denied Lore forum.

Chad severing

now I'm going to look like a copy-cat and I can't even **** on telanir because you made the post first ?

You're ballsy for writing a construct for two shelved magics

well sorry you gotta make this god a daemon if you’re really going to try and use this aengul of divinity and “innocence” into beings that are beyond the fathomable scope of reality. You’re trying to force human morality on divine beings and saying that them being self-serving assholes shouldn’t be a common trope, but in this setting its something that makes sense. While this aengudaemon feels quite out of place, I understand the intent behind it but in a world where the gods are actively trying to **** with one another AND the descendants. It’s just a really weird, non-thematic inclusion

Another day another denial

You're a bit mad having to literally drop your height six inches or rp being a full olog with mental drawbacks tbh. It's not honestly that ridiculous of a change and shouldn't be something that should cause a massive uproar. Braduks can still have their cultural clan stuff and your character isn't dramatically changed, they're just shorter to avoid the misuse of Olog blood which has happened for years.

can I get a tl;dr to review this

what the **** this seems actually interesting