The Followers of Aeriel -- Now Recruiting!

[Conster_monster 0]

(( Should I repost my application or is there something I need to improve? If thats the case just tell me and I'll do my best to fix it. ))

(( Edit. Application fixed ))

[Conster_monster 0]

(( I can't stop finding mistakes in my application as well as being informed of them ))

My Name is Raick and I wish to join the FOA. I've heard of the good you've been accomplishing and I want to help you fight the Undead who are destroying the good of this world.

Brief Character History:My name is Raick. My story is sad but it has shown me how much of an problem the undead are in this world, I wish i did more to save Rhisereld. Undead corrupt the inocent, destroy lives and homes and spare none. This is my story, I was living a normal life like any other person, earning my own keep, living in my own house next door to my best friend Rhisereld until all that changed, my best friend Rhisereld, was corrutped by the Undead turned agaist me and tryed to kill me when I tryed to help. She betrayed me and ran away to become one of those foul Undead creatures. I found out that She was planing to join those monsters when I caught her talking to a hoodedman in an dark street. I listened in on what they were talking about and I heard them talking about her joining them. I tryed with all my strenght and wits to stop her from making that big mistake but I didn't do enough to save her. Rhisereld caught me following her to find out were she was meeting the Undead. She confronted me and told me to go away before I ruined everything but I wasn't going to let her join those foul creatures. I kept trying to intercept her evey time she tryed to go meet the undead. One day I caught her talking to a hooded man on the road, I then walk towards them but Rhisereld saw me and they both ran in diffrent directions. She ran to fast for me but when I caught up with her she was talking to a Oren Guard but when I approached it turned out that she had told the Oren guard that I was a bandit and that I had mugged her on the road. She lied to the guard and told him that I had robbed her. The poor deceived guard attacked me with his sword. I had to run to escape from the guard but I easly outran him because of his heavy iron armour. While I ran from the guard Rhisereld escaped to an undead fort in snowy fields were she took refuge and told the undead that I was interfering with her joining the undead so they came to my house and burnt down my house and Rhiserelds leaving me homeless and broken from her betrayal. I never would have predicted her joining those foul creatures because she was so good of heart. I was so surprised when i heard her talking about joining them. I hate those creatures for what they have done to me and Rhisereld. They run amoke destroying everything good. Undead are a taint that I will rid this world of until i draw my last breath!

Character Name (I.C.):Raick

Character name (O.C.)Conster_monster

Race: Human

IC Age: 20

Will you be a FOA soldier, or s preacher?(Preachers are allowed to fight, but not their main focus): I will fight as a soldier for I learnt to use a sword in my time as an Oren Guard. (( I've been training on monsters. 30 swordsmanship ))

Goals in the FOA?: My goal in joning the FOA are to help stop the undead in there path of destruction, but I also think this is an great opportunity to earn a good reputation and gain a great rank in this guild. I wish to command troops one day. I do feel a stong urge for revenge on the undead but I'm puting that behind me so it may not cloud my decision.

Have you done any bad deeds?: I have done some bad deeds but nothing major, I've stolen a few minor things like a little coal or food but no real crimes. I wish to redeem myself.

How did you hear of us?: Well i was walking through Al'Khazar when I met a man in armour an he spoke to me about FOA. I thought that I should join and help cleanse the world of the Undead. The world will be a better place without them.

Are you against the Undead? Please explain why.: I hate the Undead! They corrupted Rhisereld and turned her against me. I will help destroy them so they may not corrupt other lives and kill many more.

What is your primary weapon in battle? (Sword, Axe, or Bow. Please state which one and your skill level please. Please refer to the rank list for appropriate weapon skill level.): My primary weapon in battle is the sword but I can practise so I can use other weapons. (( 30 swordsmanship ))

Are you a capable builder?: I'm not a very skilled at constructing buildings but yes I can build to a extent. I would not volunteer my self to building anything grand for I would probably ruin it.

Can you wield any other weapons?: No, but I can learn to use other weapons.

Any special skills?: I have no special skills.

Do you have faith in the Aeriel and will you tell of this to others? Please explain why.: I have faith in Ascendeds for they are pure and oposite of Undead. I will spread word that they will return. When they do they will cleanse the Undead taint form this world and all will be good. I will stop others some suffering the fate Rhisereld that you might as well say killed her.

Explain how you will help to serve the FOA, and through us, the Ascended and Aeriel: I will fight the Undead with all my strength until I draw my last breath, I'll protect the inocent from the undeads wrath. I will help those who oppose the Undead for the undead are a taint that must be removed from this world and I will make sure that non of it remains until I no longer draw breath. I will trust Ascended and Aeriel to help us destroy the undead.

[BlueBeard 27]

((I'm sure Blaedr would prefer being alleys with people that have good grammar))

Aye Ye right, when i dont even know what it is

[BlueBeard 27]

see the guild improvin!

[JCQuiinn 168]

He has already told you more than a six times NO, and has already permanently declined you twice.

[qwertyuuiopp 1]

Brief Character History: I was a citizen of AlKhazar living in a small boarding house until the city was harassed by Undead. I then sought out to fight these Undead. I went to the Orc city helping aid them while the Undead were attacking. I hope to stop these Undead and joining the Followers of Aeriel seems to be the best thing possible for me to do.

Character Name (I.C.): Corey

Character name (O.C.) Kahzo

Race: Human

IC Age: 31

Will you be a FOA soldier, or s preacher?(Preachers are allowed to fight, but not their main focus): Soldier

Goals in the FOA?: Kill all Undead, aid to those in need & watch & protect my fellow FOA members.

Good deeds you have done?: I have helped a couple of wanderers with a Bandit problem and told the Bandit to back off. I have saved the people, both times.

Have you done any bad deeds?: No.

How did you hear of us?: I was a citizen of AlKhazar and saw your guild building. (( I also read your forum post :P ))

Are you against the Undead? Please explain why: Yes, they terrorize innocent people and attack Cities & Towns.

What is your primary weapon in battle? (Sword, Axe, or Bow. Please state which one and your skill level please. Please refer to the rank list for appropriate weapon skill level.): Sword, I am level 43.

Are you a capable builder?: Yes, my architectural skills are very nice.

Can you wield any other weapons?: Yes, a bow.

Any special skills?: I'm able to fight with a sword very well.

Do you have faith in the Aeriel and will you tell of this to others? Please explain why: Yes, because I want others to realize what the Undead do and how evil they are and spread the word of Aeriel across the people of Aegis.

Explain how you will help to serve the FOA, and through us, the Ascended and Aeriel: I will gather resources, help with building (designs, etc.) go to war with the Undead, aid cities being attacked by Undead. Anything that will help out those in need of protection from the Undead.

[Blaedr 42]

((Kahzo your app has been declined. It is pretty bare.))

[argonian 12840]

((After we have got to the appropriate level in our primary weapon skill do you give us certain tasks that if we complete we get promoted?))

[Blaedr 42]

((After we have got to the appropriate level in our primary weapon skill do you give us certain tasks that if we complete we get promoted?))

((It will vary depending on what rank you are trying to achieve. I will need to see consistent, good, RESPECTFUL!!!!, roleplay for the higher ranks as well as following chain of command, performing your duties, yada yada yada. This means OOC as well, I do not want this guild to get a negative tone for poor OOC rudeness/immaturity.))

[argonian 12840]

((It will vary depending on what rank you are trying to achieve. I will need to see consistent, good, RESPECTFUL!!!!, roleplay for the higher ranks as well as following chain of command, performing your duties, yada yada yada. This means OOC as well, I do not want this guild to get a negative tone for poor OOC rudeness/immaturity.))

((Ok. I didn't mean to make you angry, sorry.))

[Blaedr 42]

((Ok. I didn't mean to make you angry, sorry.))

((I am not angry, just telling you what I would like to see))

[argonian 12840]

((I am not angry, just telling you what I would like to see))

((Ok. I thought the OOC comments were directed at me))

[qwertyuuiopp 1]

((Kahzo your app has been declined. It is pretty bare.))

Ahh, I will work on it when I get home, sorry.

[firespirit44 1279]

where do we go to find the FOA?

[Nanomatrix 0]

Brief Character History: I was born in a small village not to far from the mighty nation of Oren. I lived with my mother and father till i was around 18 when orc's came and destroyed my village and killed both of my parent's. Since then i have had to rely on people to help me and guide me to survive. Not to long ago i cam across a man by the name of Blaedr he introduced me to the FOA and told me what they did and who Aerial was. Which in turn brings me to handing in this form.

Character Name (I.C.): My name is Karter

Character name (O.C.) Nanomatrix

Race: Human

IC Age: 20

Will you be a FOA soldier, or s preacher?(Preachers are allowed to fight, but not their main focus): I would like to fulfill the role of a soldier

Goals in the FOA?: I wish to remove the evil in all of Aegis and to bring peace.

Good deeds you have done?: I have stopped several robbery's and what seemed to be thievery, i was the leader of the Reformed church army but i recently resigned due to personal reason's.

Have you done any bad deeds?: No, not that i know of.

How did you hear of us?: I know of a man by the name of Blaedr he told me of the FOA.

Are you against the Undead? Please explain why.: Indeed i am, i was recently in a battle with two of them out side of the citadel. Until then i had no idea what they were, but they are evil and a disgrace to Aegis.

What is your primary weapon in battle? (Sword, Axe, or Bow. Please state which one and your skill level please. Please refer to the rank list for appropriate weapon skill level.): I am good with a Sword and bow but personally i much prefer the bow. Sword currently is 30

Are you a capable builder?: Indeed i am

Can you wield any other weapons?: Yes, but i do not like to wield a axe if not needed

Any special skills?: I am very agile and i am a very good strategic planner

Do you have faith in the Aeriel and will you tell of this to others? Please explain why.: Yes i do, and i will be more then happy to tell this to all who i see. Because Aerial and all the men and woman that have faith in Aerial have helped me many times before.

Explain how you will help to serve the FOA, and through us, the Ascended and Aeriel: I will help serve the FOA by helping plan, prepare and help in attacks, help defend and protect Aeriel's land and people. And be of general service to those who are in need of me