Tsuyose

Extreme -1, I can't even fathom playing Necromancy if it was combined with this magic. I firmly believe that Necromancy should stay independent and to its own thing, as was originally intended.

The immortality is unnecessary, in my honest opinion. I'd advise removing it, perhaps give them a long life, but immortality? Why? It's absolutely unnecessary and just clinks onto the 'immortality' cliche a lot of lore we have, holds nowadays. I also believe that it could incite more role-play, especially with elderly folk of these creatures; perhaps those who're on their deathbed due to old age. 'Immortality' is just such a stupid cliche now, I reckon there could be a lot more interesting aspects to the role-play if they weren't made immortal. Also, I noticed you added something about Satyr's and marriage with other Satyr's, but druids also? I assume that this means that they cannot FTB with druids, which would be the standard protocol.

Trade to the Host of Brothers Notices are pinned around the expanse of Atlas, lining noticeboards and harked by trade sellers alike. Tales of a Host, seeking to spend their fortune on the iron trade, and purchase themselves a worthy supply of resources. Gossipers and merchants alike fawned at the mention of mina to satiate their greedy desires, and in their efforts to retrieve as much iron as they could, would one likely tell the tale. "I will purchase four crates of iron stacks for a large sum of seven thousand, five hundred mina. Signed, Pious." The notice would offer a means of reply, as would the merchant. (four stacks of iron blocks for 7,500 mina.)

I feel like this should be written into a lore perspective, as I feel like any proposal to lore should very well be. Perhaps a rendition of the original lore to appropriate it, which would make a better read for newer players, and other players as a whole coming into the fold.

========================================= Name of the Treaty: The Northern Atlas Alliance ========================================= Type of Treaty: Military Alliance ========================================= [Nation / Freebuild] [Name: Crown of Renatus-Marna ] [Nation / Freebuild] [Name: Dominion of Malin ] [Nation / Freebuild] [Name: Warnation of Krugmar ] [Nation / Freebuild] [Name: Kingdom of Kaz'Ulrah ] [Nation / Freebuild] [Name: Kingdom of Santegia ] [Nation / Freebuild] [Name: Kingdom of Ruska ] [Nation / Freebuild] [Name: Principality of Curon ] Alliance solidified by blood pact. Additional Allies: The Holy Canon Church The Reiter Mercenacy Company The Tribal Conglomerate of Daeland ========================================= Date of Signing: 12th of Sun's Smile, 1655 ========================================= Northern Atlas Alliance “There is no honour in warfare.” Issued and Confirmed by His Royal Highness, Constantine of the House of Horen. 12th of Sun’s Smile, 1655 War, war will always be tedious and bloody, there is no honour in warfare, and there is no logic in slights composed to one another in our onslaughts. But we, we are pious men of pride and might, we are the national gathering who has conformed into a brilliant alliance in an effort to defend our respective sovereign holds, and thwart the evil, political corruption that has sown its way into the lands of Atlas. We, as a grandiose alliance, have come together in a stalwart pact to defend ourselves against the political malformation deriving from southern Confederation; ergo, we, as an official pact, will make forward to do what we can to dissolve the pitiful Confederation. The following terms are the official legislation of the N.A.A, which does adhere to the standard and basic principles of your average military pact. The signatories of the N.A.A do, upon signing the agreement, agree to the terms and conditions of the N.A.A and will uphold its principles and its just endeavours. I. Northern Atlas Alliance does adhere to the basic law and principle of non-aggression. The N.A.A will not slight nor transgress upon the sovereign territory of those signed into N.A.A. II. Northern Atlas Alliance does adhere to the basic law and principle of a military alliance. The N.A.A will supplement their fullest military might with the aid and endeavours of the N.A.A’s formulation; the dissolution and conclusion of the Confederate War. (The Confederacy; Hanseti-Ruska, Curon, Santegia-Haria) III. Northern Atlas Alliance does hereby move forward with the notion to engage in military affairs against the Confederation, ergo permitting foreign militaries who have signed into the accord to pass freely through their respective, sovereign territory. IV. Northern Atlas Alliance does confirm and affirm the notion to pursue war with the Confederacy; Hanseti-Ruska, Curon, and Santegia-Haria. V. Northern Atlas Alliance does confirm and affirm the notion to sever all political ties with the Confederacy; Hanseti-Ruska, Curon, and Santegia-Haria until the conclusion of the Confederate War or an olive branch is agreed upon. VI. Northern Atlas Alliance does confirm and affirm the notion to sever all diplomatic ties with the Confederacy; Hanseti-Ruska, Curon, and Santegia-Haria, including mutual pacts and agreements until the conclusion of the Confederate War, or an olive branch are agreed upon. Non-aggression, trade-agreement, defence-agreement, and military-agreement. VII. Northern Atlas Alliance will move forward with the basic law and principle of a trade-agreement, ergo permitting the free-flow of trade between the sovereign territories of those signed into Northern Atlas Alliance. The flow of food, resource, and minae is ergo permitted, free of taxation. Upon the conclusion of the Confederate War, will the sovereign nations of those who have signed into the N.A.A decide upon such a greater power either persisting, or ultimately, dissolving, for the greater good of their sovereign nations, and the political climate of Atlas. In Nomine Dei, in Nomine veritas, we, N.A.A will prevail in their efforts to thwart the Confederacy and their efforts of political and military sway. If words will not sway you, then military action will. We have come together in acute agreeance with one another, that we will not now, nor ever, quiver beneath your boot. Signed, HIS ROYAL MAJESTY, Aurelius I of the House of Horen, King of Renatus, Marna, Mardon, Salvus, Seventis, and Savoy, Duke of the Crownlands, Cascadia, Frederica, and Blackmarsh, Count of Sennisten, Alamar, Frederica, Thesmer, Thelen, Lorath, and Cantal, Baron of Darkwood, Gravelhold, Fidei Defensor, Protector of the Heartlanders, etcetera. His Eminence, High Prince Belestram Sylvaeri, Royarch of Elvenesse, and Sovereign Lord of the Woodland Realm The Skahing Honourable Rex, Leydluk of Krugmar His Royal Majesty, Torvin Blackaxe, First of His Name, High King of the Kingdom of Kaz’Ulrah, Grand King of the Grand Kingdom of Urguan, Sovereign of the Dwedmar, Vicar of the Brathmordakin, Hero of the Brathmordakin, and Protector of the Dwarves. His Grace, Arpad of the House of Ivanovich, Duke of Krajia Norman de Coninick of the Free Reiter Company Centralised, combined Discord for all members of the Northern Atlas Alliance. PM an NL/Admin to affirm your place on the Discord. https://discord.gg/9kD7rY

id say yes but there's so much lore that lotc is bloated

aengulic form?? call it smth else

I'm gonna have to agree

remove bryophites altogether